Splash

Posted:
Thu Mar 23, 2006 11:04 am
by myarhidia
Taken at La-Parouse recently, my son enjoying the water.
C&C more than welcome


Posted:
Thu Mar 23, 2006 11:16 am
by Jonas
You've captured the moment well myarhidia.
The image on my monitor looks to be a little fuzzy. I assume its not the shutter speed as the water droplets in the splash have been captured nicely. Perhaps a sharpen in PP will do the trick.
I would also centre the image too, to give the subject room to "walk" within the photo. At present he's about to disappear out of the frame.
Jonas

Posted:
Thu Mar 23, 2006 12:01 pm
by moz
I quite like the non-centeredness, it scans as "sea... beach... kid" across the image and the "running out of frame" works for me in this case. It looks deliberate (don't disillusion me :) and suggests the speed of the small child quite well. Background is soft enough, and undistinguished-but-not-boring. If I was displaying it I'd probably use it as a lead-in photo to something beach-related to the right, as it clearly leads the eye that way.