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Postby Juztin on Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:03 pm

This's my first portrait with cute girl., May be not good enough.
Cause it not my skillful.

Critiques Welcome


Thank You For Your Time.





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Postby Alex on Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:18 pm

Very nice, Juztin. The first one doesn't do much for me - too much contrast and looks a bit unnatural. The 2nd one is amazing. Very nice composition, colours, everything. Looks like from a catalogue. What lens did you use and what post processing was done on the 2nd one.

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Postby wendellt on Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:29 pm

i like the art direction in the 2nd
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Postby Geoff on Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:34 pm

The 2nd image here is definately the stand out here.
Great work, very nice composition and lighting :)
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Postby Glen on Mon Apr 10, 2006 11:13 am

Juztin, going against popular opinion I like the first. More challenging and interesting for me, whilst displaying your models natural confidence.


Like others, not a fan of so much writing on the image
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Postby Juztin on Mon Apr 10, 2006 1:10 pm

Alex wrote:Very nice, Juztin. The first one doesn't do much for me - too much contrast and looks a bit unnatural. The 2nd one is amazing. Very nice composition, colours, everything. Looks like from a catalogue. What lens did you use and what post processing was done on the 2nd one.

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Dear Alex

The lens's SIGMA 70-200/2.8 HSM DG., Post processed was increase
LEVEL for more contrast. Then decrease SATURATION

Thank you for opportunity

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