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Mysterious Girl

PostPosted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:03 pm
by Juztin
This's my first portrait with cute girl., May be not good enough.
Cause it not my skillful.

Critiques Welcome


Thank You For Your Time.





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PostPosted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:18 pm
by Alex
Very nice, Juztin. The first one doesn't do much for me - too much contrast and looks a bit unnatural. The 2nd one is amazing. Very nice composition, colours, everything. Looks like from a catalogue. What lens did you use and what post processing was done on the 2nd one.

Alex

PostPosted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:29 pm
by wendellt
i like the art direction in the 2nd

PostPosted: Sun Apr 09, 2006 11:34 pm
by Geoff
The 2nd image here is definately the stand out here.
Great work, very nice composition and lighting :)

PostPosted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 11:13 am
by Glen
Juztin, going against popular opinion I like the first. More challenging and interesting for me, whilst displaying your models natural confidence.


Like others, not a fan of so much writing on the image

PostPosted: Mon Apr 10, 2006 1:10 pm
by Juztin
Alex wrote:Very nice, Juztin. The first one doesn't do much for me - too much contrast and looks a bit unnatural. The 2nd one is amazing. Very nice composition, colours, everything. Looks like from a catalogue. What lens did you use and what post processing was done on the 2nd one.

Alex



Dear Alex

The lens's SIGMA 70-200/2.8 HSM DG., Post processed was increase
LEVEL for more contrast. Then decrease SATURATION

Thank you for opportunity

Regards.
Juztin