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B&W portrait

Posted:
Sat Apr 15, 2006 6:25 pm
by blacknstormy
One of the shots I did for the self portrait exercise - it's kind of hard to set up, hit the shutter, bolt over to the seat, and kind of figure out what you are doing... well hard for me anyway
Looks crappy, but at least I had a go
Rel

Posted:
Sat Apr 15, 2006 6:30 pm
by Alex
Rel,
Very nice. I like the composition quite a lot. I would increase details in shadows though a bit, but this is subject to taste.
Alex

Posted:
Sun Apr 16, 2006 2:56 pm
by wmaburnett
You did very well i like it!

Posted:
Sun Apr 16, 2006 3:01 pm
by Dargan
Actually, surprisingly 'Black and stormy'. I like the image very much. As an option try cutting a bit of the black from the right to centre you in the image for balance as an alternative but it looks fine to me as it is. Rather than rushing back to the seat have you a remote release?

Posted:
Sun Apr 16, 2006 4:48 pm
by Finch
Nice first attempt at a self portrait, Narelle. Especially considering you didn't use a remote release and had to race back to chair.
Cheers
Michael

Posted:
Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:37 pm
by avkomp
a nice self portrait.
low key works well, I like the shadows as they are but would crop closer
Steve

Posted:
Sun Apr 16, 2006 5:40 pm
by Matt. K
Some nice tones there Narelle but I think you need to crop in much tighter. That would give the image more impact.

Posted:
Sun Apr 16, 2006 6:48 pm
by Oneputt
I have to agree with the other comments. A very nice image but in need of a serious crop.


Posted:
Sun Apr 16, 2006 6:59 pm
by PiroStitch
I like it a lot - love how the light just illuminates certain parts of you to create an outline of your profile.

Posted:
Sun Apr 16, 2006 10:03 pm
by blacknstormy
Thanks everyone

Really wasn't expecting such nice comments - thought I'd just post for everyone to have a giggle at !!!!
Cropped as suggested

And thank you all once again
Rel


Posted:
Sun Apr 16, 2006 10:17 pm
by avkomp
looks much better with the closer crop.
well done.
steve