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Nice Night

Postby macka on Wed Apr 19, 2006 10:02 pm

Was driving along longingly looking at the sky this evening, and couldn't resist hopping out when I caught a glimpse of sky with no powerlines.

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Postby pharmer on Wed Apr 19, 2006 10:53 pm

Nice one Macka. Great colours.

The only suggestion is to maybe lighten the top of the image a bit to make the tallest palm stand out a bit fom the clouds
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Postby Manta on Wed Apr 19, 2006 11:26 pm

Lovely shot Macka. Agree with Pharmer but I'd also be very tempted to pinch a bit of the tree foliage and clone it over the rooftops - give the scene a less urban look.
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Postby Geoff on Wed Apr 19, 2006 11:39 pm

Nice one Macka - has a very summery feel to it, even tho we're well out of summer :D
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Postby macka on Wed Apr 19, 2006 11:46 pm

Thanks everyone for the comments.

pharmer wrote:The only suggestion is to maybe lighten the top of the image a bit to make the tallest palm stand out a bit fom the clouds


Yeah - that area got darker when I did my curves adjustment, but I liked what it did to the rest of the sky. I guess I can fix it by playing in curves a little more?
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Postby Manta on Wed Apr 19, 2006 11:55 pm

macka wrote:Thanks everyone for the comments.

pharmer wrote:The only suggestion is to maybe lighten the top of the image a bit to make the tallest palm stand out a bit fom the clouds


Yeah - that area got darker when I did my curves adjustment, but I liked what it did to the rest of the sky. I guess I can fix it by playing in curves a little more?


Macka - switch the mode to LAB colour before you do the curves adjustment. When the curves box comes up, make sure the "Lightness" channel is the one you're working on and alt-click somewhere in the middle of the adjustment box. This gives you a smaller scale enabling much more precise adjustments to specific areas of the scene. Switch back to RGB when you're happy. Little trick I learned from Big Pix - works really well.
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Postby PALL on Thu Apr 20, 2006 6:49 am

this capture has warm summer feel to.very good silhouttes and yes as manta mentioned to cover up the house roof with foolage to give it less arban feel.lucky ya got no dust bunnies on sensor?j/k
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Postby wmaburnett on Thu Apr 20, 2006 7:58 am

Beautiful Silhouettes of the trees! Great Job
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Postby ABG on Thu Apr 20, 2006 11:55 am

Manta wrote:Macka - switch the mode to LAB colour before you do the curves adjustment. When the curves box comes up, make sure the "Lightness" channel is the one you're working on and alt-click somewhere in the middle of the adjustment box. This gives you a smaller scale enabling much more precise adjustments to specific areas of the scene. Switch back to RGB when you're happy. Little trick I learned from Big Pix - works really well.


Alternatively, you could use a layer mask which might be easier if you've already saved your psd file with layers intact. If you're not sure how to do this look at the excellent tutorial titled "A Photoshop Reference: Essential Adjustment layers at http://www.radiantvista.com/video_tutorials/page2/[/url]
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