3 from weekend so far

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3 from weekend so far

Postby firsty on Sun Apr 16, 2006 11:12 pm

Just 3 random shots from the weekend so far

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all comments welcome :)
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Postby avkomp on Sun Apr 16, 2006 11:36 pm

love the way the rays of light emerge from the tree.

also feel the monochrome works well for the last one.

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Postby stubbsy on Mon Apr 17, 2006 12:18 am

Keith

Shot #1 is fantastic and, as Steve has already said, the rays of light really make this. The light gives the entire image a wonderful ethereal glow.
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Postby Killakoala on Mon Apr 17, 2006 8:23 am

Three very nice images. Well done. I would be tempted to try a curve adjustment in the first one to increase the contrast to make the sunrays stand out a bit more from a darkened background. It would also work well in B&W.
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Postby macka on Mon Apr 17, 2006 9:42 am

I loved the first shot - excellent, just the way it is.
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Postby Pa on Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:42 am

like the first shot keith,was wondering what time of day it was taken.
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Postby Manta on Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:57 am

Stunning Keith.

All well-spotted and beautifully executed.
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Postby firsty on Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:59 am

Pa wrote:like the first shot keith,was wondering what time of day it was taken.
cheers pa

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it was taken at 4.20pm
the sun is shining through dust kicked up by cars driving along a dirt track that runs through the middle of the shot (Euroka clearing in the blue mountains)
I played with the white balance and contrast in rawshooter pro to get this look plus slight dodging on the tree trunk to bring back a little of the detail
in photoshop
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Postby wmaburnett on Mon Apr 17, 2006 11:17 am

First shot is amazing, have waited and waited to get shot like that and never have, Great Job!
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Postby pgatt on Mon Apr 17, 2006 11:25 am

These are absolutely awesome Firsty. Particularly the first one, which is very freaky but very cool at the same time. You're obviously getting the hang of the camera and PS huh! Very fine work.
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Postby bindiblue on Mon Apr 17, 2006 12:08 pm

Excellent shots.. I love them all,

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