85mm f1.4 critique

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85mm f1.4 critique

Postby padey on Fri Apr 21, 2006 3:36 pm

comments please...

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Postby blacknstormy on Fri Apr 21, 2006 3:40 pm

Andrew - love the second shot, and I'm sure the bride was thrilled. The first one has a wonderful softness to it, but I would have preferred it if the veil covered the whole face - to me it is a bit disconcerting having some of the forehead and the left eyelashes 'peeking out' on the other side - but that is just my opinion.

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Postby wendellt on Fri Apr 21, 2006 3:52 pm

both are lovely
the 2nd though is a bit too confronting as i think the veil over the face in the 1st one is amore romantic image it leaves a litle to the imagination

That nikon 85 f1.4 is Nikons best ever lens in my experience
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Postby avkomp on Fri Apr 21, 2006 3:59 pm

something to remember with veil shots:

where-ever possible you should arrange it so that there are no creases covering the face.
this will give you the soft diffusion of the veil, but not obscuring any of the brides features.

2nd one is a nice portrait of a radiant bride. I am sure she loves this.

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Postby blacknstormy on Fri Apr 21, 2006 4:00 pm

and please ignore everything I said, because Wendell does know what he's talking about :oops:

But Steve made sense too ......

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Postby wendellt on Fri Apr 21, 2006 4:12 pm

Rel everything is beuatiful appreciate everything
and you know what your talking about too!!
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Postby Kellogs on Fri Apr 21, 2006 4:14 pm

NUMBER ONE all the way! That shot is gold!!! Much more playful and relaxed compared to number two.

I also think that playing with the veil too much can make it appear too stiff and then it looks like it has been played with. I agree that it shouldn’t obstruct the bride’s face but forcing it to appear “correct” can take time and then the moment is lost. I think the way you have captured it in the first image is just perfect the way it is. GOOD JOB!!!
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Postby padey on Fri Apr 21, 2006 4:50 pm

avkomp wrote:something to remember with veil shots:

where-ever possible you should arrange it so that there are no creases covering the face.
this will give you the soft diffusion of the veil, but not obscuring any of the brides features.

Steve


I prefer the natural flow of the veil, as they can look to stiff and posed if flattened out. I also think it can carry mystic in an image.

blacknstormy, thanks for your comments.
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Postby jben_net on Fri Apr 21, 2006 4:54 pm

These is the kind of shots that makes me think I'm not pushing my 85 hard enough. Thank you for inspiring me.
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Postby blacknstormy on Fri Apr 21, 2006 5:50 pm

was playing - the first shot was so much softer than the second .... I'll delete the image if you like .....

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Postby flipfrog on Fri Apr 21, 2006 5:57 pm

number 1 hands down!
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Postby avkomp on Fri Apr 21, 2006 6:12 pm

I prefer the natural flow of the veil, as they can look to stiff and posed if flattened out. I also think it can carry mystic in an image.


natural flow of the veil is one thing, I prefer to see the eyes of the subject.

but if you are happy with it, no problems.

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Postby marcotrov on Fri Apr 21, 2006 7:16 pm

Lovely images highlighting both the quality of the 85 f/1.4 and your skills as a portrait photog. #1 is my favourite and is well crafted and rather romantic and adds a certain mystery to the image.
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Postby birddog114 on Fri Apr 21, 2006 10:24 pm

wendellt wrote:
That nikon 85 f1.4 is Nikons best ever lens in my experience


You have just discovered it haven't you?

Padey,
#1 is my best choice and it's stunner, great job!
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Postby Geoff on Sat Apr 22, 2006 12:23 am

Andrew you're a bastard, I've been seriously contemplating this lens recently and you're not making it easy for me to resist! Two lovely shots, I like them both equally.
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Postby shakey on Sat Apr 22, 2006 12:36 am

The first shot is great. While others may concentrate on the veil, its the lovely smile underneath the veil which works for me.
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