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85mm f1.4 critique

Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 3:36 pm
by padey
comments please...
85mm @ f1.4
85mm @ f2.4


Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 3:40 pm
by blacknstormy
Andrew - love the second shot, and I'm sure the bride was thrilled. The first one has a wonderful softness to it, but I would have preferred it if the veil covered the whole face - to me it is a bit disconcerting having some of the forehead and the left eyelashes 'peeking out' on the other side - but that is just my opinion.
Rel

Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 3:52 pm
by wendellt
both are lovely
the 2nd though is a bit too confronting as i think the veil over the face in the 1st one is amore romantic image it leaves a litle to the imagination
That nikon 85 f1.4 is Nikons best ever lens in my experience

Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 3:59 pm
by avkomp
something to remember with veil shots:
where-ever possible you should arrange it so that there are no creases covering the face.
this will give you the soft diffusion of the veil, but not obscuring any of the brides features.
2nd one is a nice portrait of a radiant bride. I am sure she loves this.
Steve

Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 4:00 pm
by blacknstormy
and please ignore everything I said, because Wendell
does know what he's talking about
But Steve made sense too ......
I give up - just keep taking these beautiful shots


Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 4:12 pm
by wendellt
Rel everything is beuatiful appreciate everything
and you know what your talking about too!!

Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 4:14 pm
by Kellogs
NUMBER ONE all the way! That shot is gold!!! Much more playful and relaxed compared to number two.
I also think that playing with the veil too much can make it appear too stiff and then it looks like it has been played with. I agree that it shouldn’t obstruct the bride’s face but forcing it to appear “correct” can take time and then the moment is lost. I think the way you have captured it in the first image is just perfect the way it is. GOOD JOB!!!

Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 4:50 pm
by padey
avkomp wrote:something to remember with veil shots:
where-ever possible you should arrange it so that there are no creases covering the face.
this will give you the soft diffusion of the veil, but not obscuring any of the brides features.
Steve
I prefer the natural flow of the veil, as they can look to stiff and posed if flattened out. I also think it can carry mystic in an image.
blacknstormy, thanks for your comments.

Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 4:54 pm
by jben_net
These is the kind of shots that makes me think I'm not pushing my 85 hard enough. Thank you for inspiring me.

Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 5:50 pm
by blacknstormy
was playing - the first shot was so much softer than the second .... I'll delete the image if you like .....


Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 5:57 pm
by flipfrog
number 1 hands down!

Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 6:12 pm
by avkomp
I prefer the natural flow of the veil, as they can look to stiff and posed if flattened out. I also think it can carry mystic in an image.
natural flow of the veil is one thing, I prefer to see the eyes of the subject.
but if you are happy with it, no problems.
steve

Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 7:16 pm
by marcotrov
Lovely images highlighting both the quality of the 85 f/1.4 and your skills as a portrait photog. #1 is my favourite and is well crafted and rather romantic and adds a certain mystery to the image.
cheers
marco

Posted:
Fri Apr 21, 2006 10:24 pm
by birddog114
wendellt wrote:
That nikon 85 f1.4 is Nikons best ever lens in my experience
You have just discovered it haven't you?
Padey,
#1 is my best choice and it's stunner, great job!

Posted:
Sat Apr 22, 2006 12:23 am
by Geoff
Andrew you're a bastard, I've been seriously contemplating this lens recently and you're not making it easy for me to resist! Two lovely shots, I like them both equally.

Posted:
Sat Apr 22, 2006 12:36 am
by shakey
The first shot is great. While others may concentrate on the veil, its the lovely smile underneath the veil which works for me.