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How can I fix this?

Postby Manta on Sat Apr 22, 2006 9:48 am

This shot was taken from the observation deck at Q1, the 78-storey "World's Tallest Residential Tower" in Surfers' Paradise.

It was about 1.00pm, a hazy day with plenty of salt spray around and I was shooting through glass. (They wouldn't let me throw a chair through the window to get a clearer view. What's with that?!)

Is it a lost cause? Is the image even worth trying to tweak?

Your advice would be very welcome.

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Postby Manta on Sat Apr 22, 2006 10:04 am

Here's another one...

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Postby rooboy on Sat Apr 22, 2006 10:05 am

Looks pretty good from here :D

Maybe just bump up the contrast with a bit of levels or curves? The colour looks a little cool as well, particularly in the sand. I love the angle though, great shot.
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Postby Manta on Sat Apr 22, 2006 10:14 am

Thanks Rooboy - I tried both your ideas before posting but I should have been thinking 'selectively' rather than 'globally' ..:wink:

Contrast: when I got it right for the majority of the picture, the shadows under the buildings in the foreground went almost black - I'll try it again using a layer mask so I can leave those areas alone.

White balance: again, this was tricky one due to the differences in blues, greens and creams in the shot. I did push the WB quite a bit from the original - the haze plus the glass gave things a very blue tinge. I'll give it another go though.

Thanks for your response. :)
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Postby Big Red on Sat Apr 22, 2006 10:50 am

it would have been better taking a pic on the other side of the building with the sun behind you, maybe you could go back up at a different time ?
did you get any looking south ?
i will have to try and get up there soon myself to have a go.
looks like late afternoon might be a better time ... thanks for the heads up 8)
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Postby Manta on Sat Apr 22, 2006 11:15 am

Big Red wrote:it would have been better taking a pic on the other side of the building with the sun behind you, maybe you could go back up at a different time ?
did you get any looking south ?
i will have to try and get up there soon myself to have a go.
looks like late afternoon might be a better time ... thanks for the heads up 8)


I got pics from all round but the southern ones were really washed out due to the haze.

You can get up for $15 during the day (which I thought was pretty reasonable) plus you can pay an extra $8 and go back for another visit any night. It's very impressive - I've been in a lot of 'world's tallest' things and this one feels the most solid!
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Postby leek on Sat Apr 22, 2006 12:50 pm

The horizon's not straight Simon ;-)

Wow! that thing is high - I'm getting vertigo just looking at your pic...
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Postby Manta on Sat Apr 22, 2006 12:53 pm

leek wrote:The horizon's not straight Simon ;-)


I knew there was something about it that irked me! Gary must have taken that book out from under the corner of the server..
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Postby Big Red on Sat Apr 22, 2006 1:13 pm

Manta wrote:
Big Red wrote:it would have been better taking a pic on the other side of the building with the sun behind you, maybe you could go back up at a different time ?
did you get any looking south ?
i will have to try and get up there soon myself to have a go.
looks like late afternoon might be a better time ... thanks for the heads up 8)


I got pics from all round but the southern ones were really washed out due to the haze.

You can get up for $15 during the day (which I thought was pretty reasonable) plus you can pay an extra $8 and go back for another visit any night. It's very impressive - I've been in a lot of 'world's tallest' things and this one feels the most solid!


i think you can get a seasons pass for 50 bucks and i was thinking of getting one.
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Postby Manta on Sat Apr 22, 2006 1:21 pm

That's a good deal Shane, especially when you're relatively close by. Q1 would be a fabulous base camp for approaching storms, fireworks shows, aircraft flybys, all kinds of stuff that would look great from a heaven's-eye view.
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Postby PALL on Sat Apr 22, 2006 1:30 pm

stunning angle of vieiw,i dont see any glassdust or distortion either.very good.
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