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Posted: **Mon Apr 24, 2006 9:46 am**

A few arty shots taken on saturday for your critique. I've got think skin, so fire away...

85mm f2 ISO800 1/90s

12mm f8 ISO100 1/2s

85mm f3.3 ISO800 1/90s

Posted: **Mon Apr 24, 2006 9:57 am**

Andrew,

Nice work, and I especially like the third. It seems to convey a message or two.

St Pauls in Burwood? There's not too many churches around that sport areal organ ...

In that inside church image, the colour balance seems to me to be too warm - I'm looking at pink paper and tablecloth in the foreground, and I'm thinking that this isn't quite how it should be.

Posted: **Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:15 am**

gstark wrote:Andrew,

Nice work, and I especially like the third. It seems to convey a message or two.

Yeah, i guess it depends on what you believe. The couple were very religious, so i was a little concerned.

St Pauls in Burwood? There's not too many churches around that sport areal organ ...

The church is in Nth Sydney. The name escapes me as i know there are a few old churches in Nth Sydney, but it could be St Thomas...

In that inside church image, the colour balance seems to me to be too warm - I'm looking at pink paper and tablecloth in the foreground, and I'm thinking that this isn't quite how it should be.

yeah, you're right. The WB is off. I'll have to pull the temp back in raw file.

Posted: **Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:25 am**

Andrew,

padey wrote:
gstark wrote:Nice work, and I especially like the third. It seems to convey a message or two.

Yeah, i guess it depends on what you believe. The couple were very religious, so i was a little concerned.

St Pauls in Burwood? There's not too many churches around that sport areal organ ...

The church is in Nth Sydney. The name escapes me as i know there are a few old churches in Nth Sydney, but it could be St Thomas...

I think I know it, and I think I've done a wedding there myself, which is why it looked somewhat familiar.

Thanx.

Posted: **Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:26 am**

Andrew, nice work.
Pull the temp back a bit on #2 and you'll have a winner.

Posted: **Mon Apr 24, 2006 10:30 am**

I like, in particular, the third shot of the cross. The symbolism of the cobweb is priceless

Posted: **Mon Apr 24, 2006 11:06 am**

Very well done! I love the book one the most!

Posted: **Mon Apr 24, 2006 1:52 pm**

Oooh.

I like the second.

Might make a nice black & white. :wink:

Posted: **Mon Apr 24, 2006 2:19 pm**

Great stuff Padey. Agree with previous callers about the WB on the bridal register shot but it's still my favourite. Interesting angle I hadn't seen before.

Posted: **Mon Apr 24, 2006 2:35 pm**

Hi,

For me I really liked the second posted shot.

Mark

Posted: **Tue Apr 25, 2006 9:57 am**

I love the composition of the registry shot. This angle of the church is lovely.

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