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Abandoned!

PostPosted: Thu Apr 27, 2006 10:25 pm
by Sheila Smart
Image

Critique welcome as always!

Cheers
Sheila

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 8:39 am
by Killakoala
An effective and simple composition that works quite well Sheila. On my LCD it looks a bit too bright though. I imagine it would look better printed.

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 8:51 am
by rokkstar
Like Steve said, this is simple and elegant and works really well.
The only thing I find a tad distracting is the hot spot right under the trolley, seems just a little too bright.

Great shadow though.

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 11:33 am
by Laurie
nice crop, got all of the shadow in the view. behind the trolley looks a little over, which probably couldnt be helped because of the shadow.

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 7:06 pm
by Big Red
i see they've found a way to fix the wobbles !!
:lol:

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 7:12 pm
by Alpha_7
I have a sneaking suspcion I've already seen this shot, have you posted it here before Shelia ? Perhaps I just remember it from one of your galleries.

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 7:14 pm
by Finch
Hi Sheila,

Yep, unfortunately the highlights around trolley are distracting but a nice idea.

Cheers

Michael

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 7:23 pm
by mudder
G'day,

I don't mind the hotspot behind the trolley, it gives it a spotlight type of effect for me... The simplicity of the image works really well on an every day subject...

You have a very creative eye, I always enjoy your posts...

PostPosted: Fri Apr 28, 2006 8:45 pm
by suzanneg
I agree with mudder. I think the hot spot adds something to the overall effect. I like it.

Suzanne

PostPosted: Sun Apr 30, 2006 8:38 am
by Sheila Smart
Alpha_7 wrote:I have a sneaking suspcion I've already seen this shot, have you posted it here before Shelia ? Perhaps I just remember it from one of your galleries.


No, I only just took it a couple of days ago. You must be thinking of a similar shot with a bicycle.

Cheers
Sheila