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Rock The Block, redfern

PostPosted: Mon May 08, 2006 10:58 pm
by moz
I took this and I think it's a pretty good headline shot, but it's noisy as anything and there's something about it that niggles me - it's missing something. Hints and tips much appreciated.

Image

Here's a 65kB version:
http://moz.net.nz/photo/2006/05/06-rock-the-block/30d-img_9166-3200.jpg
and the bigger, more processed one (380kB):
http://moz.net.nz/photo/2006/05/06-rock-the-block/big/30d-img_9166-3200.jpg

I'm tempted to PS the shadows off the wall/flag, but I'm not really sure that that's the problem. Maybe it's more the lack of a definite subject?

PostPosted: Mon May 08, 2006 11:02 pm
by Glen
Moz like the image but like you would prefer a focus. I find myself straining to see the band :wink:

PostPosted: Mon May 08, 2006 11:24 pm
by suzanneg
I would try it with the top cropped off, so the focus is on the large yellow circle on the wall.

PostPosted: Wed May 10, 2006 10:48 pm
by moz
<a href="http://www.moz.net.nz/image2/rocktheblock.jpg"><IMG SRC="http://www.moz.net.nz/image2/rocktheblock2.jpg" ALT="" BORDER=0></A>

Thanks Suzanne, I cropped it to more flag proportions and darkened the ground a little to get this. Look better?