rainbow lorrikeet, does the low key approach work?

been wanting to test my wimberley head but havent a suitable tripod yet,
so thanks to the extraordinary generosity of our patron
(thanks Birdy) who loaned me his gitzo 1325 until mine turns up.
80-400vr @400mm VR OFF, sb800@-2ev
I went out in the yard this arvo but it was sprinkling rain and I didnt want to get the gear wet. Pickings were slim so this guy was all I could get. no flight stuff yet
Normally lorrikeets come across fairly brightly but with the poor light and rain
This came out like a low key portrait.
This is full frame, no photoshop trickery just usm
I Kinda like the total lack of folliage and the small amount of light coming from behind.
Wonder does this work as a portrait or not?
Steve
so thanks to the extraordinary generosity of our patron
(thanks Birdy) who loaned me his gitzo 1325 until mine turns up.

80-400vr @400mm VR OFF, sb800@-2ev
I went out in the yard this arvo but it was sprinkling rain and I didnt want to get the gear wet. Pickings were slim so this guy was all I could get. no flight stuff yet

Normally lorrikeets come across fairly brightly but with the poor light and rain
This came out like a low key portrait.
This is full frame, no photoshop trickery just usm
I Kinda like the total lack of folliage and the small amount of light coming from behind.
Wonder does this work as a portrait or not?
Steve