Craig, I have to be honest with you this shot and the bee for me don't really work (for me) and I think for some part you are being let down by the lens choice (or lack thereof). I've tried on a few occasions to do closeup/ macro style work with the 70-300G it aint fun or easy most the time and the results weren't flash either but in the end I stopped trying and the lens and I just couldn't get the results I was after.
Not being the photographer in this case, I'm not sure if this is the result you were after or how close to the result the shots are, but for me niether of them acheive what I'd have been trying to do in them.
