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Bride & Dad getting out of the carModerators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators
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Interesting idea, but IMHO to make it work you would need to crop the top of the photo and turn it into a square format.
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Phillip **Nikon D7000**
Hi shutterbug whilst I can see where people will like this image, to be totally honest it doesn't do a lot for me. It is arty, yes but I feel that it's a little too abstract, something missing in this for me. Maybe a tad more contast and some blurring on Dad to enhance and draw the viewer to the reflection of the bride on the wheel arch, I'm not sure. I will follow this thread with interest to see what other members think
 .Geoff
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Id have to agree with Geoff - it doesnt do a lot for me
I suggest burning back in the blown out sky and top of the car, and lightening those parts you wish to be focal points. Maybe a B&W conversion would also help. A great idea though! J
Thanks for the feedback
 I will have a play with it........
To be honest, I didn't even see the bride until Geoff pointed it out.
I like the shot. The black border takes a little too much attention away. I thought you had cut the bride out of the shot altogether and only had the dad. Cheers, Warwick
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Vince,
I see the concept, but I think for this image there is just too much going on. There are so many different reflections. I don't know about anyone else, but I find the rain drops on the front of the car also very distracting. This is not to say that if you just consider it a shot of the bridal car - it hasn't got merit. It could be a nice touch in a magazine album as a pale background or small inset to help tell the story of the bride's arrival. Cheers, Craig
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