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Postby pippin88 on Wed May 24, 2006 4:10 pm

These were taken many a moon ago, but looked at them again yesterday and had a go with NC.

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Postby NJ on Wed May 24, 2006 4:52 pm

i really like the third shot out of these, i think its because its doing something, it makes it more interesting.
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Postby gstark on Wed May 24, 2006 5:02 pm

NJ wrote:i really like the third shot out of these, i think its because its doing something, it makes it more interesting.


But he's picking his nose. :(
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Postby Ordinary K on Wed May 24, 2006 5:34 pm

gstark wrote:But he's picking his nose. :(


aka "building up his immune system" according to Adam Spencer...

Nice capture - always worth grabbing those opportunities when they come along.
I *really* like the detail you've caught in #2.

Possibly crop #1 and #3 from both L+R, retaining the only central third?
Seems to me you need some sky for context, but this is maybe a bit too much?

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Postby avkomp on Wed May 24, 2006 5:44 pm

this is a nankeen kestral.
notice that you shot these with 105mm focal length.
good that it let you get that close.

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Postby pippin88 on Thu May 25, 2006 5:01 pm

Thanks for the comments.

Will try a portrait crop on #1 and #3.

avkomp, thanks for the name - had it before, but forgot it.
I was standing rather close - a bit necky really as it did have very sharp looking talons and kept looking at me.
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Postby ONV73C on Sat May 27, 2006 1:44 am

2nd one is my favourite... love the beautiful rich colours, these pics are so sharp too. What lense did you use?

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Postby marcotrov on Sat May 27, 2006 11:02 am

The sharpness colour and frame filling image of the second one is great despite tail missing and bird not looking at camera. Can't have everything :)
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Postby pippin88 on Sun May 28, 2006 9:21 am

Thanks.

They were taken with a Sigma 105mm Macro lens.
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