Cheers,
Owen.
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Practicing my composition...
Here's an image I took yesterday focusing on my composition and trying to get it to look right. What do you think?
Cheers, Owen.
i like the composition, its just a bit distracting that half of the person at the right of the image is lit, and half isnt, there is nothing for my eyes to really focus on. but i like how the rail leads the eyes down to the beach where there is another person standing. also love the treatment!
Nathan
D700 | MB-D10 | Nikkor 14-24 | Nikkor 24-70 | Sigma 70-200 | 20 2.8 28 2.8 35 2 50 1.8 | Sigma 105 | SB-800 http://www.flickr.com/nathanjphoto/
The top of the rail is what caught my eye and followed it to the sand / beach where there was nothing, perhaps a more acute angle so both people are on the same line of sight seperated by the top rail?....
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