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Here's an image I took yesterday focusing on my composition and trying to get it to look right. What do you think?



Cheers,
Owen.

i like the composition, its just a bit distracting that half of the person at the right of the image is lit, and half isnt, there is nothing for my eyes to really focus on. but i like how the rail leads the eyes down to the beach where there is another person standing. also love the treatment!

The top of the rail is what caught my eye and followed it to the sand / beach where there was nothing, perhaps a more acute angle so both people are on the same line of sight seperated by the top rail?....

Thanks for the comments guys, and ideas on how to improve it

Cheers,
Owen.

Great leading lines, but they end...then the guy is too small.