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Sunrise glow on rural buildings (2 images)
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Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:04 amby Willy wombat
So i am pretty happy with these two, mostly because I got out of bed early and "worked" to get a shot for a change.
I would appreciate if you guys could please comment as to the shot composition and quality.
Cheers
Steve
Queuing for the outhouse...
[img]http://www.fototime.com/{BCBC6DAB-0405-408A-B458-60B792D6A9B4}/picture.JPG[/img]
Shearer's quarters
[img]http://www.fototime.com/{BE564B3F-64D4-4D5A-8252-346B3C4192A9}/picture.JPG[/img]
Posted:
Sun Jun 04, 2006 1:33 amby Sir Tristram
Love the shot of the shearers shed. Great colours. Well done.
Posted:
Sun Jun 04, 2006 11:08 amby avkomp
like the second shot although I feel it would be stronger without the black lower left. Perhaps clone some of the grass over it??
steve
Posted:
Sun Jun 04, 2006 11:48 amby shakey
avkomp wrote: Perhaps clone some of the grass over it??
steve
What grass? Doesn't look like there's been much rain there lately.
Posted:
Sun Jun 04, 2006 2:50 pmby Bodak
I like your second shot out of the two, but feel like others, that the dark band at the bottom is distracting.
Posted:
Sun Jun 04, 2006 4:05 pmby mudder
G'day mate,
Not sure on the first, the outhouse is such a large subject in the frame and I'm not sold on the tree encroaching on the left... I think if you stepped back a bit you could maybe get a better balance, maybe using the lines of the old fence?
Ahhh, the second image works very nicely, I'd be tempted to crop off just a smidge from the left hand side to bring the shed closer to the left hand side (third?) and give the tree more balanced open space to lean into... Hmmm, might be tempted to crop the dark band off the bottom too...
Damn, I forgot to mention, that's beautiful soft golden light...
Posted:
Mon Jun 05, 2006 9:05 pmby Willy wombat
Thanks for the feedback guys. Good news as the second shot was also my favorite. I think its a keeper.