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Parklands

PostPosted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 11:51 pm
by phillipb
Your thoughts on this one are appreciated.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 12:53 am
by Willy wombat
There are aspects that I like and dislike in this shot Phillip.

The highlights are blown out in the top left and the there are some distracting sticks/branches that could go.

But Ii like the treatment and the misty appearance near the jetty. Perhaps a pano crop could be an option?

PostPosted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 1:10 am
by byrt_001
hi

uuhmm.... it just does not make sense, reflection on the water of the house.

try a diferent angle?... maybe sunrise? that small jetty has a lot of potential. the all area has a lot of great angles.

christian

PostPosted: Sat Jun 17, 2006 3:20 am
by Steffen
I quite like this. Firstly, the tones. Then, the blown-out light above the house provides a mysterious centre of interest. I find myself looking into the reflection trying to find out what's there above the house...

I would clone out those three twigs sticking in from the top. They look like scratches on an old photograph.

Cheers
Steffeen.

PostPosted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 5:13 pm
by suzanneg
I like it too. I have certainly lingered at looked at for some time. It's intriguing.

PostPosted: Sun Jun 18, 2006 5:33 pm
by Colcam
Once agin Phillip, you have another nice one. Good contrast and really crisp. Like the others suggested, I would knock out the twigs at the top. The sky is very hot, but it doesn't trouble me greatly. The house at the rear needs to be normal density to match the reflection and not appear too weak.
I still think it is great though. :)
Well done
Col