Colours of the Night - Melbourne

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Colours of the Night - Melbourne

Postby pharmer on Sun Jun 18, 2006 1:16 pm

Some night shots taken around the Yarra, quite enjoying carrying the tripod around :)

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Postby Geoff on Sun Jun 18, 2006 1:21 pm

Nice work again Barrie - I like #2 the most, It'd be cool having a small person in the shot, dead centre back towards camera looking up.

All these images are nice and crisp - which lens?
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Postby pharmer on Sun Jun 18, 2006 1:24 pm

1,2 and 4 are the 10-20 Sigma, the 3rd was the Tamron 28-75 F2.8
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Jun 18, 2006 2:01 pm

Nice stuff Barrie, I really like the first one, did you PP the light like that ?

I agree with Geoff, something to put shot 2 in scale (a small child) would make the shot stronger for me.

#4 Is great, love the reflections

#3 is the only one that doesn't seem to work for me, not sure if thats because I'm used to you and the Sigma.
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Postby pharmer on Sun Jun 18, 2006 2:16 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:Nice stuff Barrie, I really like the first one, did you PP the light like that ?

I agree with Geoff, something to put shot 2 in scale (a small child) would make the shot stronger for me.

#4 Is great, love the reflections

#3 is the only one that doesn't seem to work for me, not sure if thats because I'm used to you and the Sigma.


Thanks Craig - The first one, I reduced saturation in the yellow areas to make the blue stand out.

The other shots have no PP at all

The third one - I just liked the various colours and the glass (maybe not the strongest composition possible)
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Postby admajic on Sun Jun 18, 2006 4:07 pm

Great shots. Love 2 as well.
Also Im a sucker for a good pano. Nice and crisp :)
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Jun 18, 2006 5:33 pm

Oh how different we all are.

#3 is the standout for me - I like the multilayered composition and the contrasting colours and having some people in shot gives a great sense of scale.

#1 I like next best - for the contrast between the white and the blue. Compositiona ppeals too.

#4 - looks kinda odd to me because the relfections are streaked as if the camera moved. Other than that I like it.

For me #2 is the worst since there isn't much to hold my attention - moreso because it's pretty much one colour.

Thanks for sharing these Barrie.
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Postby pharmer on Sun Jun 18, 2006 9:19 pm

stubbsy wrote:Oh how different we all are.

#3 is the standout for me - I like the multilayered composition and the contrasting colours and having some people in shot gives a great sense of scale.

#1 I like next best - for the contrast between the white and the blue. Compositiona ppeals too.

#4 - looks kinda odd to me because the relfections are streaked as if the camera moved. Other than that I like it.

For me #2 is the worst since there isn't much to hold my attention - moreso because it's pretty much one colour.

Thanks for sharing these Barrie.


No problem Stubbsy, thanks for all the comments

With #4 - the reflections are on a moving river and the shutter was open for 15 seconds, so would account for the streaking I guess
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Postby daniel_r on Sun Jun 18, 2006 9:28 pm

Barrie,

You're really getting value out of your gear :D

I like what you've done with all 4.

#2 looks like it's in some nuclear bunker and a big steel door is going to slam shut any minute :D I like how you've captured the curves and lines.
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Postby PiroStitch on Sun Jun 18, 2006 10:09 pm

2nd one is my favourite, probably because nightscapes no longer hold my interest :?
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Postby Alex on Sun Jun 18, 2006 10:11 pm

Barie, Love no.3 - the colour range is interesting.

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