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			 by atencati on Thu Jan 06, 2005 6:27 pm
 plying with trees today...not sure why.  Click the links for larger (1000 px wide) images
  http://www.sierrafirerescue.com/images/nature/oak_1.png This one was a long (30sec) exposure using the kit lens, it came out a little softer that I wanted.
  http://www.sierrafirerescue.com/images/nature/oak_2.png This was kit lens, f 11 at 40mm, was trying to capture more detail in the clouds.
 thanks 
 AndyD70, 70-200VR, 18-70, 50 1.8, SB800
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 by Matt. K on Thu Jan 06, 2005 6:53 pm
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Nice!
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 by pippin88 on Thu Jan 06, 2005 6:54 pm
 As you mentioned, the first one is rather soft, and that really detracts from the image. Maybe it's also the colours, but it's missing something that the second image has. 
 I really like the second image, it works really well.
 
			
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 by sirhc55 on Thu Jan 06, 2005 7:01 pm
 The second photo is very nice BUT I love the first one because I would put this in the art classification and being a designer it has appeal to me.
 Just goes to prove that everyones taste varies    ChrisChris--------------------------------
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 by mudder on Thu Jan 06, 2005 7:19 pm
 G'day,
The second one (oak_2) really does it for me, very nice with an interesting background too...
 
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 Mudder.
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 by coolpix on Thu Jan 06, 2005 7:34 pm
 Nice atencati...the second photo is great, i like it very much...nice colours  Everything is possible, the impossible just takes longer 
			
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 by Onyx on Thu Jan 06, 2005 8:58 pm
 I like trees, so I enjoyed viewing your "experiment" Andy.    I often shoot similar (but crappier) abstract or arty-type segments of trees, but never displayed them online for fear of ridicule or be reported to the men with straightjackets... 
			
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 by meicw on Thu Jan 06, 2005 9:00 pm
 Hi atencati,  Very interesting shots.  I like them both, but the first one is my fav.
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 by Greg B on Thu Jan 06, 2005 9:02 pm
 Nice work Andy, that first one has a magical quality. Greg  - - - -  D200 etc
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 by atencati on Fri Jan 07, 2005 4:52 pm
 Surprisingly, the first pic is as shot.  I cropped it a bit, but no other changes.  I have another where the coast guard flew throught the shot fairly low and left a light streak.  Thanks all
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 by wile_E on Fri Jan 07, 2005 4:58 pm
 Both very nice shots, atencati - the first one deserves special mention. Like the 'surreal' feeling of it. 
			
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 by Glen on Fri Jan 07, 2005 5:06 pm
 Andy, very very nice, especially the first 
			
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