Adam...looks like you are heading the right direction

The exposure looks ok but I think the composition could have some changes.
I would have liked to see more of the colorful clouds and less of Bondi in the background. The other part I would have maybe done differently is have more of the rocks in the foreground to lead into the image.
The silkiness of the water is good and I like....I have noticed we suffer the same issue with the color of the water...I don't know why but it does capture at this odd semi cyan strangely blue color this time of year with a longish exposure