Ferris Wheel At Night

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Ferris Wheel At Night

Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:29 pm

I apologise for the noise (my eval copy of Noise Ninja expired). I like these shots and have a personal favourite, just wonder which version others prefer.

The first is my favourite, all shot with the 80-200 @ 2.8 with ISO 800.

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Postby Sir Tristram on Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:33 pm

Yep number one for me too. Like it a lot.
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Postby macka on Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:33 pm

Cool shots, Craig. #3 is my favourite. Nice and simple.
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Postby Manta on Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:40 pm

Craig - noise isn't a major drama here, in my opinion. The slight graininess adds to the experience. I'd have to agree with Macka here and say #3 is the pick. "Simple", as Macka says, is the real attraction of this particular shot. The composition is very pleasing to the eye without competing subjects, as in the first shot.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Jun 27, 2006 9:42 pm

Number #3 got 2 votes in our household, and simple sums it up nicely.
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Postby leek on Tue Jun 27, 2006 10:43 pm

Great shots Craig... #1 would have my vote - just a pity that you weren't 1cm to the right :lol:...
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Postby blacknstormy on Tue Jun 27, 2006 10:44 pm

I really like number 1 because it gives the photo a 'sense of place'..... hope that makes sense?
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Jun 27, 2006 10:45 pm

#1 cliched
#2 Simple and effective
#3 An expansion on #2

I vote for #2
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Postby Dug on Tue Jun 27, 2006 10:49 pm

#2 & #3 work for me :D
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Postby Alpha_7 on Tue Jun 27, 2006 10:58 pm

leek wrote:Great shots Craig... #1 would have my vote - just a pity that you weren't 1cm to the right :lol:...

Um, I have more, so I'll check, by why would 1 cm of helped exactly ?

I really like number 1 because it gives the photo a 'sense of place'..... hope that makes sense?


Thanks Rel and it does make perfect sense.

#1 cliched #2 Simple and effective #3 An expansion on #2

I vote for #2


Thanks Chris, guaranteed to get a simple and honest response from you.


Well really interesting viewing the different opinions as there is no clean winner, diversity in opinion Excellent!
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Postby leek on Tue Jun 27, 2006 11:13 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:
leek wrote:Great shots Craig... #1 would have my vote - just a pity that you weren't 1cm to the right :lol:...

Um, I have more, so I'll check, by why would 1 cm of helped exactly ?


Sorry... I should have expressed myself better... I meant 1cm to the right in relation to the print as it displayed on the screen... then you would have had slightly less space on the left and probably would have included the whole mast that holds up the wheel...
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Postby Cows Go Moo on Tue Jun 27, 2006 11:20 pm

I like #1. To me it's not cliched. If it was lit up it would be. Looks kind of desolate.
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Postby rokkstar on Tue Jun 27, 2006 11:25 pm

NUmber 3 for me Craig.

The bright spot on the right is distracting to me, and I prefer the wider angle on 3 to 2.
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Postby Matt. K on Tue Jun 27, 2006 11:53 pm

I like all of them Craig. Technically fine images and a great subject.
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Postby Geoff on Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:12 am

Eeek - I just got home, so many images posted already! When to catch up!?!?! Great day ppls - nice images Craig!!
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Postby Poon on Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:21 am

It is beautiful, Craig.
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Postby Hlop on Wed Jun 28, 2006 8:44 am

Another nice set, Craig. As for noise, try this trick - gaussian blur (something between 3 and 5 until noise is blurred), then menu "Edit->Fade Gaussian Blur". In the appeared dialog window leave 100% and select Mode->Color. This will discolourise noise making it less distracting and looking somehow like a film grains
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Postby Oneputt on Wed Jun 28, 2006 8:47 am

Great shots Craig, and for me the pick is no1. Noise is not an issue here.
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Postby ABG on Wed Jun 28, 2006 9:24 am

Great set of images Craig. Your photography is getting better and better. #2 & #3 are my faves.
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Postby graphite on Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:43 am

I would agree with you, the first is my favorite. The third is a close second though. I really like the framing of the wheel and the carriages. Nice and clean.

number two is just a bit to close of a shot for my preference.
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Postby ozimax on Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:18 am

Can't give you a reason but #3 for me appeals most.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Jun 29, 2006 3:11 pm

Thanks for the feedback everyone! For me photographically sunset was the best part of the Micro Meet when I felt the most inspired and my shots are significantly better during this period.
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Postby PiroStitch on Thu Jun 29, 2006 3:38 pm

#1 for me too Craig. I think the noise adds to the pic and doesn't detract from it.
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