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by Sheila Smart on Thu Jun 01, 2006 10:43 am
Thanks for the opportunity to choose this month's Exercise in Style which is to be Extremely Shallow Depth of Field.
Submissions valid between 1-30 June 2006
THE RULES:
IMPORTANT: There are no prizes. This is not a challenge. It is an exercise...
1. All members are urged to participate with photos taken in the current month
2. All makes and models of camera accepted, FSLR, DSLR, P&S, pin hole, MF, LF
3. All method of Post Processing (PP) allowed- unless 'theme' states otherwise
4. Only one (1) image per member
5. Submissions valid between the 1st and last day of the month.
6. You may do more PP after posting your image
7. First person who posts an appropriate image gets to choose theme for next month
8. Have Fun !!
And to start, here is mine (which of course is not part of the exercise but just to give you an idea of "extreme" DOF.)
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by SteveGriffin on Thu Jun 01, 2006 2:28 pm
2 shallow DOF shots from this morning.
Pinhead in Cork
Cycad
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by wendellt on Thu Jun 01, 2006 3:04 pm
excellent subject choice for this excercise Sheila
i love creamy bokeh
shot at f1.4 on the Nikkor 85mm f1.4
the blur at the forefront is not dof it's a blurred out garment in front of her face

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by Nnnnsic on Thu Jun 01, 2006 3:06 pm
That just doesn't work at all like that, Wendell.
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by Geoff on Thu Jun 01, 2006 3:12 pm
Wendell - the bokeh behind the model on the left (as you look at her) is certainly creamy - the OOF blur of the material is quite distracting unfortunately.
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by rokkstar on Thu Jun 01, 2006 3:14 pm
My word Steve, that pin head is an extremely extremely shallow DOF. Just a tiny sliver. Excellent shot. The second is great too, colours are lovely, but you're gonna have to choose one as your entry I'm afraid  .
Like that shot a lot Wendell looks like it was taken in a low sun lit field after a concert in 1969 (bring back free love).
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by Nnnnsic on Thu Jun 01, 2006 3:22 pm
rokkstar wrote:bring back free love
Damnit. Why didn't I get to live when there was free love?
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by losfp on Thu Jun 01, 2006 3:37 pm
Even "cheap" love would be something
Ahhh... will have to break out the 50/1.8 for this one I reckon.
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by blacknstormy on Thu Jun 01, 2006 5:23 pm
Great topic Sheila - thankyou 
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by NJ on Thu Jun 01, 2006 6:23 pm
just went outside before and got this one

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by sirhc55 on Thu Jun 01, 2006 7:18 pm
There is a story to this HD. I thought it was a kaputt but it was the enclosure that was no good. 
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by leek on Thu Jun 01, 2006 9:22 pm
Excellent choice Sheila (and not at all like the topics you mentioned to me)... I'll have a go at this one... probably with my 80-400VR & Close-ups... you can't get much shallower than that 
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by pharmer on Fri Jun 02, 2006 2:24 pm
Shot of the end of a large rusty nail against the blue sky

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by daniel_r on Fri Jun 02, 2006 5:42 pm
I finally managed to get some spare time to put a ES worthy entry in. Had a bit of fun getting the lighting right
A 85/1.4 would have been a treat for this!.
Both from 50/1.4 @ f/2
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the alternative/companion image is:

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by digitor on Sun Jun 04, 2006 5:44 pm
People just love carving up the bamboo in the Botanic Gardens
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by Grev on Tue Jun 06, 2006 12:24 pm
This sounds really fun, will be submitting later on.
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by marcotrov on Wed Jun 07, 2006 12:01 am
Was just playing around and took a few images of an often Photographed subject but different perspective and it fits the theme
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by kazuhiro on Wed Jun 07, 2006 12:05 am
Hi I am new here, just got a d70s on the weekend.
A friend pointed me in the direction of these forums to learn some tips.
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by Geoff on Wed Jun 07, 2006 12:58 am
Mucking around tonight - here's the result:

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by JED on Wed Jun 07, 2006 9:27 am
This effort using an old borrowed 50mm f1.8. Oh for a 1.4.  .
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by Sheila Smart on Wed Jun 07, 2006 11:48 am
kazuhiro wrote:Hi I am new here, just got a d70s on the weekend. A friend pointed me in the direction of these forums to learn some tips.
Welcome to the forum. Perhaps you can take another with a much shallower depth of field.
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by Sheila Smart on Wed Jun 07, 2006 11:50 am
We have some nice efforts so far. So lets see a lot more
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by Yi-P on Wed Jun 07, 2006 2:42 pm
Okay, just digging up one from the availables...
a < 0.0005m DOF 
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by ONV73C on Wed Jun 07, 2006 10:24 pm
Fantastic pic Yi-P!
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by blacknstormy on Wed Jun 07, 2006 11:32 pm
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by Geoff M on Fri Jun 09, 2006 9:08 pm
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by Geoff on Fri Jun 09, 2006 9:20 pm
Nice one Geoff - where/how did u come to shoot this? 
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by Geoff M on Fri Jun 09, 2006 9:26 pm
Thanks Geoff
This was taken today using my 60mm Nikon Micro at f5. It is the front lens cap of said lens.
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Wow Geoff - incredible effect 
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by kenny12 on Mon Jun 12, 2006 2:44 am
EXIF intact 1/8000 shutter, 580EX + 2x500W halogen light
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by hash77 on Mon Jun 12, 2006 9:56 am
Ah some people's brains work faster than mine. Here is a shallow DOF of my housemate's Hyundai Excel's automatic label on the front quarter panel (yes, it's an automatic!)
taken with 90mm f2.8 Tamron Macro
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by Slider on Mon Jun 12, 2006 7:47 pm
Water Lily

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by edneeves on Mon Jun 12, 2006 8:34 pm
Ed.
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by Willy wombat on Thu Jun 15, 2006 11:37 pm
Some sort of seed pods?
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by beetleboy on Fri Jun 16, 2006 1:57 pm
This is kind of Selective Focus rather than DOF but i think it works for the theme anyway - how else can you shoot shallow DOF at f16?!

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by hash77 on Fri Jun 16, 2006 2:09 pm
Nice! I'll pay that. Very different interpretation to the obvious.
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by beetleboy on Fri Jun 16, 2006 2:12 pm
Cheers hash..just realised the coincidence of shooting the number 16 at f16 as well!! Of course that was planned from the very beginning!!
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by Steffen on Fri Jun 16, 2006 3:25 pm
beetleboy wrote:Cheers hash..just realised the coincidence of shooting the number 16 at f16 as well!!
And consequently, your DOF is huge (as opposed to extremely shallow) - all the way from the trees to the clouds
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by Steffen on Sun Jun 18, 2006 2:49 am
Here's one from last evening. The DOF isn't really extreme (this was taken at 85mm f/4) but pretty small:
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by Heath Bennett on Sun Jun 18, 2006 11:17 am
Drink up.
Pentax ist*D with 50mm 1.4:

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by Big Red on Sun Jun 18, 2006 8:40 pm
finally got around to thinking up something to shoot ...
during the week i bought 3 second hand extension tubes with a Pentax F50/1.4 [for $99.00] and wanted to try it out so i added three other extension tube i had to the combo and shot this one dollar coin at f1.4
the eyes have it ...

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by Heath Bennett on Mon Jun 19, 2006 3:47 pm
Nice one Big Red. It is impressive how much detail a coin has close up - mainly scratches. Have you tried to mount the Pentax 50mm in reverse?
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by Sheila Smart on Mon Jun 19, 2006 4:32 pm
Nice work coming in folks. I am glad I picked something which forced you all to think outside the envelope.
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by Willy wombat on Mon Jun 19, 2006 11:10 pm
Sheila - A great choice
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by Big Red on Tue Jun 20, 2006 12:40 am
Heath Bennett wrote:Nice one Big Red. It is impressive how much detail a coin has close up - mainly scratches. Have you tried to mount the Pentax 50mm in reverse?
not long after i bought the DS i glued two filter rings together and made a 50-50 macro using two M50/1.7 lenses ...
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by Sheila Smart on Wed Jun 28, 2006 10:09 am
Nice range of entries. I hope Steve Griffin is thinking of the next topic for July.
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by micka on Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:54 am
Unfortunately I borrowed this lens and had to give it back 
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by Alpha_7 on Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:59 am
Here is mine, taken during the Waston's Bay Meet.

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by SteveGriffin on Thu Jun 29, 2006 9:09 pm
Sheila et al,
I have a few things in mind for the July ES just can't decide which one to go with at the moment. I guess it will be decided at some ungodly hour on Saturday morning on my way to work
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