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B&W Portrait

PostPosted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 1:32 pm
by Raskill
Ahoy folks,

Just thought I'd post a black and white portrait of my favourite subject.

I know your all probably getting sick and tired of seeing my son, but he's very good to practice technique on. I like this image as a portrait.

D70s, SB600, 70-200VR (170mm), 1/50, F/2.8. Purposely used a shallow DOF to get the eyes sharp, but hands and foreground soft.

Any C&C appreciated and welcomed.

Image

Thanks in advance.

PostPosted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 3:08 pm
by Alpha_7
Beautiful shot! I think the B&W could be improved, it looks a little flat for me the whites don't look white?

But I just adore the cute little pose! Enjoy being a Dad and having a fair still model before long he will be running around make these moments harder to capture ;)

PostPosted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 5:19 pm
by graphite
I would agree with Craig. There really isn't any White areas to give it some contrast. Other than that, the shot is cute.

PostPosted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 5:26 pm
by Alpha_7
I might add too that if you had a bit more DOF then maybe you could of got the hands a little sharper.. not really too much of an issue as it's only a secondary focus in the picture.

PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 2:54 pm
by Raskill
Thanks for the replies folks.

There isn't a lot of white in the shot, basically the whites of his eyes and the edge of his collar. I played about with it though (after reisnatlling windoze, CS, and 2 new HD's) and got some better results.

I won't bore people by posting the new one though.

Thanks for the help.

PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 3:18 pm
by Alpha_7
Post the new one, please and don't think it's boring people, if it's boring them they don't have to look or comment :)

PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 3:18 pm
by wendellt
beautiful boy, quirky expression too
as craig said tweak the b+W for improvement

did you bounce the flash from the ceiling?
direct flash on infants is a bit risky, but i'm sure you knew that

PostPosted: Thu Jul 06, 2006 4:21 pm
by Yi-P
I'll follow with the BW conversions to make this photo go top notch :)