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female model feedback

PostPosted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 10:28 pm
by robster
Just seeing what people think.

Shot with hotlights, no flash units :)


Image

Be brutal, I don't break easy :)

Rob

PostPosted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 10:31 pm
by rmp
Shoudn't this be in "Image Reviews & Critiques"?

Looks ok, but doesn't leap out and grab me as an "oh wow" pic. Lighting around the neck is a bit harsh and dark.

Not that I could do any better, model photograph isn't my thing.

PostPosted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 10:46 pm
by robster
apologies yes, could a mod please move this. Sorry about that.

Rob

PostPosted: Thu Jul 20, 2006 11:56 pm
by Matt. K
Image is overly red and very passive....but close! You need to get her animated and to play up to the lens a little. She has the potential to be a good model. The lighting is a bit distracting. I am being harsh but you are on the right track and I hope to see some more shots. Refine, refine, refine and magic will occur! :D :D

PostPosted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 6:52 am
by Greg B
I agree with Matt! She has a great look, but passive doesn't look right. Straight into the camera, challenging, a bit of attitude.

Looking forward to more.

PostPosted: Fri Jul 21, 2006 8:50 am
by Oscar
Hi Rob.
I agree with the previous comments on this pic. The model seems to be very photogenic but with her current look I would more imagine her with a more "punk" attitude - I can see her with the fingerless gloves challenging the photographer with the one finger salute.
Cheers,
Mick