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Citi Blank

PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 12:09 am
by Juztin
This outdoor portrait.,
Critiques Welcome.

Thank for your time.
Juztin.



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PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 12:13 am
by sheepie
The one that really speaks to me out of these is the last. While the first one is quite good, I prefer the interaction in the last scene, with the model and the passerby being on each side.
The middle shot does nothing, and in fact looks to me like the model is not in full focus (not sure whether that's an artifact of resizing for the web).

PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 12:49 am
by Yi-P
The first one can be good, but just that the pose on the model is quite unatural.


The last one is best of the 3, I like the natural pose/look on the model in this one. PS. Are these slightly underexposed? They look a little bit underexposed on my screen.

PostPosted: Mon Jul 31, 2006 1:08 am
by Zeeke
Justin, from other pics from you.. these just seem really flat in contrast compared to what you normally produce.. and a little dark.. nice pics tho..

Tim