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by Manta on Tue Aug 01, 2006 3:57 pm
This month's Exercise in Style will have you searching for patterns and shapes that reflect the geometry of our world. There's plenty to be found in the urban world but it's the natural landscape that was the original inspiration for the creative thinkers and designers of the past.
Your mission... to seek out and record those patterns and, if you can, enlighten us to some of the more obscure; the patterns we take for granted or don't even see as we rush through our daily lives.
Images must be taken this month. Good luck and have fun!
Here's a very boring one that Blind Freddy could see...but it'll do for an example:

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by rooboy on Tue Aug 01, 2006 4:48 pm
Perfect timing Simon - I had to go outside to check on the washing, and wham - I spied a rather mundane, yet iconic geometric pattern

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by Manta on Tue Aug 01, 2006 6:42 pm
What a classic! Can you still swing on it?
Nice one Patrick - you get the gong for next month's topic!
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by rooboy on Tue Aug 01, 2006 7:25 pm
Manta wrote:What a classic! Can you still swing on it?
Nice one Patrick - you get the gong for next month's topic!
Definitely no swinging on that one - the weird angles in the photo are caused by the ~20 degree slant where it's rusted through.
Cheers, better get thinking 
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by Willy wombat on Tue Aug 01, 2006 7:52 pm
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by macka on Tue Aug 08, 2006 9:49 am
Can we get this stickied please mods?
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by mark on Tue Aug 08, 2006 1:08 pm
Here's something that most of us take for granted almost everyday.
click for larger view
Great topic Simon.  We are surrounded by it. Geometry that is.
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by Manta on Tue Aug 08, 2006 1:13 pm
Nice one Mark.
C'mon folks - we haven't exactly been killed in the rush here!! Surely there're a lot more patterns and shapes out there..
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by Yi-P on Tue Aug 08, 2006 1:32 pm
C'mon folks - we haven't exactly been killed in the rush here!! Surely there're a lot more patterns and shapes out there..
Im still trying to find a spherical rectangle 
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by SteveGriffin on Tue Aug 08, 2006 8:36 pm
Here is my attempt - Super-womans plane

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by Steffen on Tue Aug 08, 2006 10:43 pm
Yi-P wrote:Im still trying to find a spherical rectangle 
Do you want to borrow my fish-eye?
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by griffo on Wed Aug 09, 2006 6:14 pm
Bank of QLD building in Queen St, Brisbane. Taken on Anzac day, after the dawn service:
Or a variation on the original post by manta (MC Escher?):
or lastly...
edit: oops, just re-read the rules, not taken this month....
should I go take the pics again?
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by Manta on Thu Aug 10, 2006 9:54 am
We'll forgive you Griffo. You've still got 21 days to get some more!
Nie shots - the third has indeed some interesting patterns. I'd be tempted to crop right in to the fronds and leave the viewer guessing what it was..
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by zafra52 on Fri Aug 11, 2006 8:23 pm
I took this picture as an aftertought last Sunday with my little Olympus SP350 without a tripod. I resized in PhotoShop and I sharpened it using PhotoControl. I just wanted to find out how to post images in this site. The focal length 8mm, F/3.5, Exposure 1/60 sec, ISO Speed ISO-50.

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by Geoff on Sat Aug 12, 2006 1:36 am
Great topic/subject! Will look into this one over the weekend! 
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by zafra52 on Sun Aug 13, 2006 11:25 pm
I am not sure if it is allowed to have more than one entry or if this picture I took this morning is more appropriate for the month's theme, but and I like it because the sculpture (as big as a bus) mimics nature. Its geometric pattern represents nature and adds a familiar form to a busy city landscape.
I used Photoshop to convert it from RAW format to JPG and added a Gaussian Blur to give the subject more prominence. Some details are Canon 30D, ISO Speed ISO 100, Shutter Speed and Exposure Time 1/50, Aperture f/5.6, Lens 18-55, Focal length@ 53mm, Tripod, Raw Format.

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by wendellt on Sun Aug 13, 2006 11:33 pm
SteveGriffin wrote:Here is my attempt - Super-womans plane 
what is this, some sort of kite?
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by hangdog on Mon Aug 14, 2006 12:40 am
SteveGriffin wrote:Here is my attempt - Super-womans plane
Isn't it Wonder Woman's plane?
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by SteveGriffin on Mon Aug 14, 2006 5:25 am
Hangdog you are correct it is Wonder-Womans plane. It clicked a couple of days after I posted the pic but someone else had posted to the thread so I couldn't edit the post.
Wendellt - It is a FLAT wire frame sculpture that is hanging outside of the Museum in Brisbane only metres from the Zafra52's Cicada above. I PSed the wires that hold it up out of the picture. Careful use of angles makes it look 3D
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by zafra52 on Fri Aug 18, 2006 7:07 pm
I must go and check this Wonder Woman structure, since it is so close to the cicada. I thought Wendellt had taken a sky picture and created the structure on top using some graphic program.
Really guys, sometimes it is very difficult to know what is a real picture and what is a pictorial creation.
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by wendellt on Fri Aug 18, 2006 7:24 pm
zafra52 wrote:I must go and check this Wonder Woman structure, since it is so close to the cicada. I thought Wendellt had taken a sky picture and created the structure on top using some graphic program. Really guys, sometimes it is very difficult to know what is a real picture and what is a pictorial creation.
that's SteveGriffin's picture not mine
when i responded with the quote function it embedded his post in mine
it's a very interesting image i wonder how it's suspended up there?
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by zafra52 on Sat Aug 19, 2006 2:05 pm
Sorry Wendellt. I should have been more careful, mea culpa... mea culpa!
Yes, you are right the fact you don't see how the structure is supended in the picture is what made me think that it was a clever montage.
Anyway, once I receive my new lense from http://www.camerasdirect.com.au (I bought from them a Canon 28-135mm F3.5-5.6 IS USM hoping it is better and sharper than the supplied kit), I will pay it a visit and see it by myself. Not because I want to take that particular picture but because I was told to go and see the new facade of the Brisbane Library.
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by christiand on Sat Aug 19, 2006 3:53 pm
here is my little contribution:
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by zafra52 on Sat Aug 19, 2006 6:05 pm
That's a very interesting and yet simple perspective Christiand. I quite like it.
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by BT*ist on Mon Aug 21, 2006 1:18 am
There's a parking garage near Pitt Street Mall in Sydney that has this rather odd aesthetic (?) design feature just above the rollerdoor. I'd never noticed it before, but thanks to the ES, I was keeping an eye open for this kind of thing.
Quirky:

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by zafra52 on Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:45 pm
That is a very interesting pattern BT*ist. Quite interesting, in fact. Did you intended to be in B&W?
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by BT*ist on Tue Aug 22, 2006 9:22 am
Hey Zafra (52) The detailing is metallic and relatively dirty. In other words, the colour (lack thereof) didn't really add anything so I removed it entirely. It must have been some 1960s/70s attempt to jazz up.... .something.... somehow!
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by zafra52 on Tue Aug 22, 2006 6:35 pm
BT*ist, it is a pleasant abstract.
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by radar on Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:26 pm
My attempt at the ES - snowfence.
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Not all that many entries this month but the ones that have been submitted have been great.
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by Oscar on Tue Aug 22, 2006 8:35 pm
Thought this angle might suit:
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by terminaltackle on Tue Aug 22, 2006 10:19 pm
I dont know if this is geometrical, or qualifies?
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by JED on Mon Aug 28, 2006 7:38 pm
Didn't work out how I saw it in my head but decided to post it up on the dartboard anyway.
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by Manta on Tue Aug 29, 2006 5:39 pm
SOme great images here folks - well done. Jed, I reckon yours is my favourite. It's simple yet has a lot to offer when you look more deeply into it, exploring all those reflections.
Only a couple of days to go before Rooboy puts up the next topic!
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by JED on Wed Aug 30, 2006 9:26 am
Thanks very much, Manta.
Would have liked a touch more dof, but basically got what I was after.
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by zafra52 on Thu Aug 31, 2006 9:06 pm
JED, I quite like it as Manta says it has interesting reflections. Well done!
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by xorl on Fri Sep 01, 2006 12:33 am
It's been an odd month for me - mostly portraits. Any other month this year I would have had plenty of geometric images to choose from..
Great topic btw!
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by xorl on Fri Sep 01, 2006 12:53 am
Gonna sneak another in while it's still August:
FM3a, 45mm f/2.8P, Velvia *cough*
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