Same competition.... end of the weekends activites. Would love some feedback







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Southwest Rocks - Part 2Hmm, following the lack of response to part 1 I thought I would subject myself to further embarrasment and post a part 2.
Same competition.... end of the weekends activites. Would love some feedback ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
I missed part one, I'll have to go digging because these are fantastic
![]() #1 - A very peaceful image with great light. I'd consider cropping out the leftmost silhouette, don't like the way he/she merges with the BG, but otherwise beautiful. #2 - Beautiful light again (obviously you were busy during the golden hour ![]() #3 - Lovely shot, it's so full of atmosphere. Not sure about the black bar across the top though. I'm sure the SLSC would love this, great capture of teamwork in action. #4 - Sharp & simple - would look great printed. #5 - Nice work with the exposure to keep shadow details. Definitely another keeper ![]() #6 - Weakest of the set (although given the beauty of the other shots, this isn't saying much). No real focal point in the image, but again it's a gorgeous scene captured at the perfect time of day. Fantastic stuff, now I'm off to check out part one ![]() So join in the chorus, and sing it one and all!
Thanks guys, I really appreciate the feedback.
![]() Rooboy that's just the kind of feedback I was looking for. I'll make a few adjustments on see what I can come up with ![]()
The third one is my pick! Definitely worth framing it up.
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Very sharp and interesting images. I really enjoyed the series. #1 and 3 are standouts but they all have something to offer. Wonderful ligth. COlour clarrity is amazing!
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#1, Terrific mood and lighting, great image... Very moody and serene... #2, Tempted to crop the BL corner and left hand side a smidge and move the boat thing (Ha! I really know my boating terms huh ![]() #3, Woah, this is excellent, magic light and shadow... The stand out here... The dark band across the top is distracting though, as it's a pano you could crop that out and not lose your subject... This is excellent... #4, Nice silohette, simple and very effective... #5, Nice scene, like the long shadows across the rocks in the sand, the hot spot from the sun is distracting though... Might be worth exposing a second copy with a lower EV and just laying it over the top and erasing all but the hot spots from the sun and it's reflection in the water? #6, Not sure on this one with the bright area on the edge of the frame, lovely setting though... Aka Andrew
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