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Not to everyone's liking but I was going more for the curves from the sign than anything.

Interesting concept Wayne, I prefer the first over the second its a little bit cleaner and the curves interest me more. I'd in two minds about a little cloning to clean the shot up further, it's a tough one.

nice detailing

the first one could do with a person stickign their head ot from the O
perhaps a revisit?

hower i think the framing on the 2nd is a little off
I try to get leadign lines to match up in at least 1 or more corners of a framed image
makes for more thoughtful composition

but rules are meant to be broken so keep real and shoot it your way

you know in his latest works picasso experimented with light writting
with photography

using a candle or small diode light and a long exposure photograph
like what those light grafitti artists are doing with lumasol art
and the stuff i used to do when i started out

I saw the picture once in the sunday magazine
had no idea wat year it was taken in but picasso looked really old

not sre if it was a joint project with a photographer

Great photos, although the, in the second one, the screw in the sign is distracting, unless this what you wanted to focus on.

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I'll clone out the screws and other light flares later. Just wanted to see if I was on the right track with the composition and idea

Thanks guys.