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3 of a recent model

Postby NetMagi on Sun Aug 27, 2006 4:02 am

All shot indoors with an SB-800 bouncing off a ceiling or wall.

Comments/critique (good or bad) welcome

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-Rich
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Postby Big V on Sun Aug 27, 2006 11:24 am

Rich the poses are quite good and given that you only had your flash as a light source, the exposures have worked out well. A soft box really compliment this type of shoot, as it is far more flattering on the skin, it gives nice soft light which in turn gives nice soft skin. Modelling is a very challenging field of photography and I wish you well in your venture..
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Postby shutterbug on Sun Aug 27, 2006 12:24 pm

I find the hair on the first one distracting :wink:

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Postby marcotrov on Sun Aug 27, 2006 2:49 pm

Rich lovely poses and exposure but i agree with Big V's and shutterbugs comments. A little PPing to soften the skin texture and tone a little, a little masking may be in order here and they will be terrific. :)
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