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Model Shots - Part 3

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Model Shots - Part 3

Postby bonou2 on Sun Aug 27, 2006 8:36 pm

Hey all,

Thanks for looking, critique would be awesome, i "again" was going for the highkey look. Hope they work. The model is very hard to please.

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Postby Geoff on Mon Aug 28, 2006 12:26 am

Dan!!
Marked improvements!
No.2 is the best here in my opinion. Something you'd easily see plastered all over bus shelters and in shop fronts! Nicely done!!
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Postby Yi-P on Mon Aug 28, 2006 12:33 am

No2 is brilliant!! Im no expert in this, but I think the PP is strong at the border softening at #2 specially at the top of her head...

Is she a real model? :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Aug 28, 2006 1:10 am

I really like the last one, and I do think they are an improvement over your earlier shots... I'd love to see you model smile a bit more.. she often looks annoyed, and the only time she did crack a smile her hand hides it (in shot 3)
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