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Hey all,

Thanks for looking, critique would be awesome, i "again" was going for the highkey look. Hope they work. The model is very hard to please.









Cheers
Dan

Dan!!
Marked improvements!
No.2 is the best here in my opinion. Something you'd easily see plastered all over bus shelters and in shop fronts! Nicely done!!

No2 is brilliant!! Im no expert in this, but I think the PP is strong at the border softening at #2 specially at the top of her head...

Is she a real model?

I really like the last one, and I do think they are an improvement over your earlier shots... I'd love to see you model smile a bit more.. she often looks annoyed, and the only time she did crack a smile her hand hides it (in shot 3)