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Postby Pa on Sat Sep 02, 2006 9:10 am

first taken at 5.45am f22 shutter 4 secs

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the second at 5.56am f27 shutter 25/100 sec

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the third at 6.11 f4 shutter 2/3000 sec

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Postby Blackspear on Sat Sep 02, 2006 11:07 am

1st and 3rd do it for me, very nice indeed.

Well done.

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Postby Pa on Sat Sep 02, 2006 2:58 pm

thanks blackspear for your comments.i like 1&3 as you do.
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Postby sheepie on Sat Sep 02, 2006 3:06 pm

The last one here, Pa, is really nice - I like the fact it has some foreground interest, placing the viewer of the photo much more in the scene than if the foreground wasn't there. One suggestion, try this with a crop taking the bush on the right hand side out, and slightly off the top.
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I agree...

Postby zafra52 on Sat Sep 02, 2006 3:23 pm

The first is very nice, but the third is best because the counter effect of the shadows. Well done!
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Postby Pa on Sat Sep 02, 2006 3:32 pm

thanks zafra52,and leon. i also took another one with a different focal length of 24mm.tell me what you think of it thanks.
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Postby Lopezzz on Sat Sep 02, 2006 3:59 pm

Hi,

Fo me still the best is first 1 and 3. If you cut top and bottom you should receive great panorama on the wall.

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Postby ado_civon on Sat Sep 02, 2006 5:27 pm

I'd agree with everyone saying 1 & 3 but i like the warmth in the 2nd image too.

Very nice shots. I should get up at 5am too to take some nice photos.... but my sleeping hours from 2 - 10 :(
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Postby Pa on Sat Sep 02, 2006 6:26 pm

thanks lopezzz and ado_civon. getting up early is not a problem to me.
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Postby asaroha on Sat Sep 02, 2006 7:41 pm

I like #3 the most too. Well done :D
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Postby Pa on Sat Sep 02, 2006 8:30 pm

thanks asaroha for your comments.
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Postby in1way on Sun Sep 03, 2006 11:26 pm

Pa these are all quite stunning and agree with others #3 really does it for me.
Were these taken at Mudbishops?
Nice shooting.

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Postby Pa on Mon Sep 04, 2006 7:05 am

rob the first 2 were taken on a grassy bank about 2 hundred mtrs away from mudbishops the third was taken up near the road. do you know the area
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Postby in1way on Mon Sep 04, 2006 8:31 am

Know Old Bar very well Pa, my mum lived there from 1980 to 2004, also had a brother there, he owned the property adjacent to Ibis Lane off Old Bar Rd. I think my mum sold at the right time, the view from her place now looks at the back of the supermarket......ugly!
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Postby Pa on Mon Sep 04, 2006 10:59 am

it's a great little village rob.
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