Warning Nudity - Part 2

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Warning Nudity - Part 2

Postby bonou2 on Wed Sep 06, 2006 11:19 am

Thanks all for the nice comments re the last series. Makes it much easier on the eyes when you have a beautiful subject as i had.

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And the gorgeous Kelly!

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Postby Laurie on Wed Sep 06, 2006 11:25 am

you are a lucky man.

*is jealous*
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Postby Glen on Wed Sep 06, 2006 11:27 am

Dan, 1 works best for me, a real step up from the other 3 for me :wink:
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Sep 06, 2006 11:35 am

I really like #1 as well, and also like the concept of the silhouette in the last but would of prefered a slight different angle to show of her curves a little more. Thanks again for sharing!
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Postby bonou2 on Wed Sep 06, 2006 11:46 am

Alpha_7 wrote:I really like #1 as well, and also like the concept of the silhouette in the last but would of prefered a slight different angle to show of her curves a little more. Thanks again for sharing!


how about this one?

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Postby Nogshale on Wed Sep 06, 2006 12:44 pm

Is the gorgeous Kelly actually nude?

Its my favourite!
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Postby elffinarts on Wed Sep 06, 2006 12:59 pm

Nogshale wrote:Is the gorgeous Kelly actually nude?

Its my favourite!


I think you need to calibrate your monitor, I can see a bikini there.
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Postby Nogshale on Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:06 pm

elffinarts wrote:
Nogshale wrote:Is the gorgeous Kelly actually nude?

Its my favourite!


I think you need to calibrate your monitor, I can see a bikini there.


but its a silhouette, shes totally black...
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Postby elffinarts on Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:10 pm

not quite. ;)
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Postby Laurie on Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:10 pm

Nogshale wrote:
elffinarts wrote:
Nogshale wrote:Is the gorgeous Kelly actually nude?

Its my favourite!


I think you need to calibrate your monitor, I can see a bikini there.


but its a silhouette, shes totally black...

there is a bikini there, i can see it also.
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Postby Nogshale on Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:21 pm

damn....and i thought my monitor was bright.
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Postby elffinarts on Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:27 pm

Nogshale wrote:damn....and i thought my monitor was bright.


probably why my eyes hurt at the moment, I've been in front of this one for the last 13hours. :lol:
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Postby Nogshale on Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:41 pm

13 hours !!! Your crazy.

My eyes hurt about 30 min :(
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Postby Rainey on Wed Sep 06, 2006 2:39 pm

Pretty impressive photos, I quite liked the silhouette.
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Postby terminator on Wed Sep 06, 2006 6:12 pm

I`m not sure about the cut-off head in the first one, but I`m so tranfixed by those jugs....can`t stop looking at em..... :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:
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Postby Nogshale on Wed Sep 06, 2006 6:16 pm

terminator wrote:I`m not sure about the cut-off head in the first one, but I`m so tranfixed by those jugs....can`t stop looking at em..... :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:


Yeah their massive!
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Postby Glen on Wed Sep 06, 2006 6:37 pm

Calm down guys, Dan may well be directing his model to look here to see how the images were received (I am sure he would have told her they will be being displayed here), I doubt she needs comments on her anatomy as well :wink:
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Postby gstark on Wed Sep 06, 2006 6:47 pm

All.

What Glen said.

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Postby rokkstar on Wed Sep 06, 2006 8:14 pm

#1 works best for me here.

Love the shapes and the curves of the woman. beautiful
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Postby beetleboy on Wed Sep 06, 2006 9:53 pm

Dan..love number 1.

There's a certain "creaminess" (for want of a better word in light of what's already been said here!!!!) about it that I just love. I'd quite like to see it without the hair and possibly the crystal but they don't bother me all that much.

You certainly do have a very gifted model tho - is she in the biz cos she should be making good cash with her assets (she has more than two guys!).
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Postby Yi-P on Wed Sep 06, 2006 11:08 pm

Whats the name of the model on the 2nd set ? :)


Both are gorgeous, great work :D
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Postby Technik on Wed Sep 06, 2006 11:24 pm

Well done Dan! Excellent shots as the first set.

My fav one is the #2, great B&W contrast - it works really well. :D
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Postby wendellt on Thu Sep 07, 2006 3:33 am

dan

i like the last one it's much more tasteful. in particular the cloud element

who are these models by the way?
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