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A wander around the beach

Postby rooboy on Thu Sep 07, 2006 3:59 pm

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C&C welcome & appreciated :)
So join in the chorus, and sing it one and all!
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Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Sep 07, 2006 4:29 pm

Patrick out of all of these I like the last the most, the light gives it a great quality and I love the repetition in the geometric shape of the flats, shame about the random stuff on some of the balconies.

The early shots with the graffitti didn't really capture me.
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Postby norbs on Thu Sep 07, 2006 8:39 pm

The sky in the 2nd last one is great.
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Postby Yi-P on Fri Sep 08, 2006 12:30 am

All said above, 2nd and last :D

2nd I like the composition and elements included in the shot, it tells alot from it.

the lst one simply because of the colours and geometry lines of the building and sky :)
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Postby ABG on Fri Sep 08, 2006 10:26 am

I like the whole series Patrick. I would have liked a little more space on the second image - the crop seems just a tad tight to me.
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Postby stubbsy on Fri Sep 08, 2006 10:47 am

Patrick

At the risk of being repetitious my take is exactly what Craig said.
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Postby adam on Fri Sep 08, 2006 12:26 pm

I also want to say what Stubbsy said!

and I love the clouds in the sky with the warm buildings :)
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