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What an intense week! Motorola Fashion Week

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What an intense week! Motorola Fashion Week

Postby PiroStitch on Fri Sep 08, 2006 1:39 pm

It's been a crazy and intense week. I have way too many pics to go through over the past week.

Thanks to Master Wendell for his tips and advice. He's a top bloke who will definitely go far in photography.

Runway stuff, while formulaic, isn't as easy as some may think but the effort is worth it!

Anyway, here's a result from last night's show:

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Postby Geoff on Fri Sep 08, 2006 1:46 pm

Nicely done there Piro!
Lots of goodness about this image!
Exposure, clarity, mood...good work, any more?
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Postby PiroStitch on Fri Sep 08, 2006 2:25 pm

Thanks Geoff.

From Tuesday night's show:

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There are heaps more pics to post up, but I want to consolidate them first and post them later. Just putting up a few for now ;)
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Postby Alex on Fri Sep 08, 2006 2:44 pm

Great work Wayne. Was looking forward to these!

Been a crazy week for me too, as you know, with attending shows Mon-Wed at AFW. Have gone through most photos, but haven't had a chance to upload them yet. I'm on very little sleep.

Agree re Wendell. I've only been to one show each day and felt dead afterwards - have no idea how the guy can keep it up! :-)

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Postby Alpha_7 on Fri Sep 08, 2006 4:19 pm

Great work Wayne, keen to see more once you've had a rest and had time to sort through all your images. :)
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Postby Willy wombat on Fri Sep 08, 2006 4:56 pm

Some very nice work here Wayne. You are getting some good advice from Wendel obviously.
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Postby mic on Fri Sep 08, 2006 10:02 pm

1st is a really nice shot Wayne.

Well done, glad I'm not getting you to work on my Website now, I'd get nothing changed with all your pretty girls you hang around with now :shock:

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Postby wendellt on Fri Sep 08, 2006 11:57 pm

hi wayne

it was a pleasure seeing you and alex in the press box
you both have worked hard to be part of the accredited media but it's only the start and from ehat i have seen you have both done extremely well. Exposure is good, timing great as both feet are on the ground and some sots show compositional flair with both models in the shot

the first image of jessica davidson in Bowie looks oversharpened to me though

Now your next step is to get these images published.

myself i'm dead and looking forward to a well deserved weeks rest, i think i'm all fashiond out
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