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Through the glass/framed

PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 10:07 pm
by Geoff
Took this early last week down at Balmoral Beach. I quite liked the effect of the glass shutters that helped frame the image. Opinions and critique welcomed:

Image

PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 12:07 am
by stubbsy
Geoff

First off aren't you supposed to be out on the town celebrating your 30th :?

For me, the shutters are a distraction. The image is strong enough to have stood on it's own without the extra framing.

PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 12:32 am
by PiroStitch
i don't mind it. it looks like you've added it in photoshop actually. I think to make the image work better, crop off the bottom where you can see the gutter. Then the leading lines from the glass shutter and the concrete path will work better

PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 1:08 am
by Yi-P
I'd like better if the 'frame' was parallel to the horizon :P


stubbsy wrote:Geoff

First off aren't you supposed to be out on the town celebrating your 30th :?



Happy 30th if I missed it :D