Motorola Fashion - Sept 8 - The last night

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Motorola Fashion - Sept 8 - The last night

Postby PiroStitch on Sun Sep 10, 2006 9:42 pm

Just a few pics from the final night of motorola.

Had issues with picking which ones to share and get CC'd on.

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Always managed to get eye contact with her :D
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The rest of the gallery here
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Postby wendellt on Sun Sep 10, 2006 9:58 pm

wayne

don't know why you posted thes images

the 1st is a repeat
and most of the others have dodgy facial expressions

but technically and compositionally images are good you always do this but your best work is embedded in your site like

image 12 on page 2 counting top left to right next line

and

image 12 page 7

i think if your showing editors your site the images need numbers the flash doesn't allow you to get limks of images so it would be hard for editors to pick images for publication

a not on fashion runway apart from al the tips i gave you it is important to understand fashion and know which image sto showcase uisually the elegant dresses with great drop(flow of dress) and beautiful prints shoudl be showcased first, then the tailored conservative looks, then the experimental stuff, there was a lot of beautiful shows like Jayson Brunsdon night 1 and white suede night 4
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Postby mic on Sun Sep 10, 2006 11:09 pm

Great Folio there Wayne, I reckon they are all tops.
Website & layout is great how you have displayed them all too.

Well done.

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Postby Alex on Sun Sep 10, 2006 11:23 pm

Wayne,

You posted no. 1 before and it's good. No.2 is a strange facial expression as Wendell said. I agree, there are much greater ones in your gallery.

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