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St David's Part - 2

PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 11:14 am
by kingshill
Hi all,

I'm new to this forum having been introduced by Johnd (thanks John).
John noted in his thread that we went to the park after dark on Wednesday. My best shot from the evening is below, comments gratefully received.

John

Image

PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 9:44 pm
by johnd
Hi John, welcome to the forum and well done on your first post. It was a difficult shoot with all those street lights around. The shot may benefit from cropping a little off the top and about 1/3rd off the left hand side to put the monument central (horizontally) and the main trees over to the left hand side of the shot. I think the image could be improved with a little more contrast and a tad more sharpening (particularly of the monument).

Cheers
John

PostPosted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 10:00 pm
by Oscar
Hi John and welcome to the forum. I agree with johnd about the cropping and sharpening. Look forward to some more shots. Cheers, Mick :)

PostPosted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 12:31 pm
by Rainey
I love it, the colours are vibrant. Nice first entry.

PostPosted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 1:00 pm
by poompy
i like it! it sort has an eerie feeling for me. possibly because of the dark area on the left. a tighter crop would most likely produce a different feel.

PostPosted: Mon Sep 11, 2006 8:34 pm
by kingshill
Hi all,

Thanks for the suggestions and comments. Much appreciated.

John