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Uncertain Images

Postby stubbsy on Mon Sep 11, 2006 7:19 pm

I'm currently on 3 weeks leave :lol: and have been scouting some locations around home for shots. I went out yesterday, but the weather was crap. I was unhappy with every shot I took and deleted them all. Today I went back to the CF card and retrieved them. I've done work on 3 possibles, but I'm still not sure if they are any good as they are very dark and sombre. I'd appreciate your honest comments. If they are shit tell me. :wink:

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Postby sheepie on Mon Sep 11, 2006 7:26 pm

I like what you've done with the colours in the last two, the first one doesn't strike me much.

The second one is incredible, and I reckon would be worth printing up - OK, it's probably not what the sky really looked like, but it's a really cool pic.

The third one hasn't got quite the punch of the second. I think it's because the colour changes from top to bottom, rather than the water reflecting the clouds. I'd like to see this with the sky closer to the colour you have achieved with the water.

You didn't pick a great time to be on holidays did you - at least the fish tank should be clean now ;)
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Sep 11, 2006 7:31 pm

Fish tank gets a clean tomorrow :wink:

Here's the original for #2 to answer your Q about the colour of the sky. It's before ANY processing (distortion is because it was taken with the 10.5 DX FE - as was the 3rd).

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Postby adam on Mon Sep 11, 2006 7:34 pm

I think they get better in the order posted!

I always like coloured skies and reflections! You did it nicely! I like :) Particularly the last 2!

and now that you've posted the original! wow! great fixing job!!!! :D
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Postby wendellt on Mon Sep 11, 2006 7:50 pm

the 2nd one

what are you location scouting for?
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Postby pippin88 on Mon Sep 11, 2006 7:52 pm

Peter,

I think leave is stuffing with your thoughts.

#2 and #3 are great.

Would you like to go for a shoot sometime? I'm waiting on my 12-24, there was no stock when I ordered :( When I get it, I want to have a good play.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Sep 11, 2006 8:00 pm

Thanks Adam, Leon. Here is a square crop of #3 (thanks Leon) which I think I like better (a bit lighter too)

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Postby stubbsy on Mon Sep 11, 2006 8:02 pm

Wendell

I'm scouting for good spots locally for when I play tour guide to you sydney DSLRUsers members :wink:

Nick - I'm free until 1st October. Would be good to catch up
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Postby Geoff on Mon Sep 11, 2006 8:18 pm

Peter - I love the 2nd shot. As Leon has said it's probably not what the sky looked like however a great pic and some fantastic PP work on it. The third image doesn't really grab me much, not sure what it is but the water looks like a painting or something. Not sure what it is. Keep on posting though :)
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Postby christiand on Mon Sep 11, 2006 8:19 pm

Hi Peter,

really like the photos.
I think the colour manipulations bring these shots into the realm of paintings.
Just imagine these were paintings - how lovely.

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Postby wendellt on Mon Sep 11, 2006 8:23 pm

Peter if i go up i want to see that rocky shoreline place where leigh took a picture of a huge rock that place looks amazing
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Postby poompy on Mon Sep 11, 2006 8:29 pm

i love that square crop. the colours are beautiful and it looks sharp as a tack.

i find it funny that you deleted them all and then recovered them, nice save. :P
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Postby jethro on Mon Sep 11, 2006 8:45 pm

Peter No 2 and 3 are very nice images even if the weather was crap. I believe that you can take some great pics when the skys are grey due to the fact that you can introduce colour by way of ISo or exposure due to the lack of natural light.
Different hues can be attained and I believe that if most tried to exploit this different lighting medium then you will learn to image in a different realm.
Just another thought, to which Peter has exploited and gained.
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Postby owen on Mon Sep 11, 2006 8:45 pm

I'm a fan of the square crop as well, although I did like the original too.

Don't go deleting your images straight away next time, you've got some really nice ones.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Sep 11, 2006 9:09 pm

I like the last shot, both crops of it work for me. 3 Weeks leave sounds like bliss Peter enjoy it while you can.
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Postby mic on Tue Sep 12, 2006 12:06 am

Stubbsy,

2 & 3 are great and my pick, 1 comes up better if you drop the light levels.

The clouds come up better and puts a more stormy feel to it.

Or

You could INVERT :roll:

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Postby Yi-P on Tue Sep 12, 2006 1:04 am

#2 is my pick, a great feel of the uncertain weather but a bright day showing up partially ahead :D


Its gonna be sunshine soon enough :)
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Postby Sheila Smart on Tue Sep 12, 2006 11:53 am

Love the "Turneresque" sky of #2. Beautiful work all round.

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Postby Rainey on Tue Sep 12, 2006 12:07 pm

Wow, the last two are really impressive. I love what you've done with the colours.
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Postby thelastname on Tue Sep 12, 2006 2:47 pm

I quit like 2 and 3 they are very nice pics, and as mentioned before are worth printing.
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Postby MHD on Tue Sep 12, 2006 2:58 pm

2 and 3 are keepers... I like the square crop as well..
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Postby Glen on Tue Sep 12, 2006 3:02 pm

Stubbsy like 2 & 3 especially with the square crop, I also like 1 but without most of the foreground, just crop the bottom 1/3rd away (will still leave you with an 8mp image :lol: )
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