Workshop Pt-2 The Two Models

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Workshop Pt-2 The Two Models

Postby Yi-P on Sun Sep 17, 2006 12:13 pm

Now, presenting the models for the day, Jacinta and Dee:

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All taken with kit lens, about 50-70mm range, 1/160@f/1/13
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Postby Oscar on Sun Sep 17, 2006 2:05 pm

Good shots Yi-P. Well done. I couldn't manage to get a nice expression on both of the girls faces. One or the other seemed to have her eyes closed or an expression that wasn't flattering.
Your shots show nice composition and lovely use of the light sources.
Cheers, Mick :) :)
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Postby johnd on Mon Sep 18, 2006 2:06 pm

I like these images YiP. The composition and lighting are very nice. I certainly would have been interested in this workshop if I had been in Sydney. I've looked at some other shots from the workshop and a few of them seem a bit dark to my eyes (maybe my monitor), but I think you have the lighting spot on.
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Postby johnd on Mon Sep 18, 2006 2:57 pm

I take that back about some shots looking dark. I think it was my work monitor which is heaps darked than my home monitor. :oops: There certainly were some great shots taken there.
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Postby Yi-P on Mon Sep 18, 2006 7:54 pm

Thanks Mick & John for the kind comments :D

Dont you just hate to have a crappy monitor at work?? hehe :P
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