
and a slightly different shot, in colour:

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From a portrait shoot todayI had a portrait shoot today at Coogee - with a 2 1/2 year old! Challenging to say the least but I got some ones I was pretty happy with. Here is one. Comments and critique welcomed as always:
![]() and a slightly different shot, in colour: ![]() Geoff
Special Moments Photography Nikon D700, 50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.4, 70-200 2.8VR, SB800 & some simple studio stuff.
Geoff, I think stick with the colour version of the kid. The b&w version freaked me out somewhat with his big eyes and sharp incisors. Otherwise they're pretty good. Also maybe clone out the runny nose
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Thanks Piro - runny nose?
He does have big incisors eh? I hadn't noticed it until u pointed it out. He had loads of energy though ![]() Geoff
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Geoff
That's a great pic, but definitely the colour one as the eyes look weird in B & W In the colour one, the whites of his eyes look a touch cyan so maybe the WB is off (but my monitor calibration is a little whacky ATM so I may be wrong) Peter
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Well dried up remnants of a runny nose ![]() Hassy, Leica, Nikon, iPhone
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I like the second, with the eyes turned. captures the hightened observations that children have.
THe black and white is a little demon like, but if you can mask a layer, and whiten the eyes, maybe teeth, you should have a nice keeper. I know how hard it is running after toddlers outdoors, I'm still trying to capture at least 10 keepers of my 18 month old niece.
Hi Geoff,
I actually prefer the B&W. Nice eye contact with the camera. The colour one is excellent too. Alex
Geoff,
I have to agree with the B&W being a little bit freaky with those eyes. Its a great expression and smile of the kid, however I have to say that those two poles, they're bit obstructive in the way, one may be enough here.
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