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One from todays meet

Postby trotkiller on Sat Sep 23, 2006 10:34 pm

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Postby stubbsy on Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:47 pm

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I think this image would have looked better in colour. I'm guessing the very dark top is heavily polarised blue and as such works against the image in B & W for me, but would be quite strong in colour. As it is the top is just too dark. Sorry
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Postby adame on Sun Sep 24, 2006 3:50 pm

The smooth gradient and high contrast on the memorial really work, although i cant help but think the upper section of the sky needs ot be a touch lighter, thats being very picky tho.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Sep 24, 2006 4:48 pm

I actually like the gradient, I have a similar shot but with a little more of the base, I don't have a CPL for my 50mm, I hope you don't mind me posting my version.

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Postby Justin on Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:38 pm

I like em both but could the B&W do with some sharpening?
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Postby trotkiller on Sun Sep 24, 2006 9:54 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:I actually like the gradient, I have a similar shot but with a little more of the base, I don't have a CPL for my 50mm, I hope you don't mind me posting my version.


Not at all, the colour version of mine looks kinda the same.

For me the dark blue sky was the reason I tried the B&W on it ;-)

Shot it with the 24-120 without a CPL...
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