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Postby owen on Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:11 pm

I saw this from my window in sydney and thought it looked worthy of a photo. Comments welcome.

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Postby Yi-P on Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:36 pm

Very symmetrical patterns and shapes!! Its just at the right balance!!

Tho, I was expecting them to be painted in orange blue and green (MS style) :P
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Postby Justin on Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:37 pm

It's slightly distorted at the corners and I'd pump up the orange, but otherwise I think it's a great photo!
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Postby Alex on Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:41 pm

Like it quite a lot. Nice patterns of colour. It is slightly distorted but a great composition nevertheless.

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Postby Glen on Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:49 pm

Owen, think it is great and if that is straight from the camera I thought the distortion was low
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Postby jethro on Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:55 pm

I would hate to live there. Claustraphobia comes to mind!
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Postby owen on Mon Sep 25, 2006 10:57 pm

Glen wrote:Owen, think it is great and if that is straight from the camera I thought the distortion was low


Nah, the scene wasn't directly in front of me, it was slightly over to the side so I had to correct it a bit in photoshop. Obviously didn't take much care with it :)

Thanks for the comments guys. Jethro, absolutely right the city was very claustrophobic. I'm still amazed how I managed to drive in there and get out in one piece.
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