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At Peace...

PostPosted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 10:58 pm
by ozczecho
I havent posted an image here for a while, so I thought I would share and get peoples feelings on this one:

Image

Any Comments & Critique is welcome and most appreciated..

TIA

Mike

PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 2:39 am
by Ausyuppy
Hi Ozczecho,
I like it, it reminds me where I want to be.....asleep :) It really shows the peacefullness of a child's sleep.

In my mind I feel it needs to be cropped a bit as I feel the child is the focus of the photo, yet my eyes arent being drawn to her. Maybe crop out a bit more of the curtains, but then you will lose the effect of the cushion.

I still like it the way it is though.

Cheers
Steve

PostPosted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 10:51 am
by JordanP
Excellent shot - the B&W converstion and high key nature of it works well in MHO. I would crop out the pillow on the lefthand side - I find that distracting and drawing my attention away from the subject. Very cute.

PostPosted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 1:24 pm
by ozczecho
JordanP and Ausyuppy thanks for the feedback. Sorry for such a late reply. As soon as I posted this I left for China to watch the F1s go around....

Interesting suggestions about the crop. I have a closer crop but liked the wider angle. The pillow was added to add balance but I can see your point. Interesting to see how differently everyone sees the photo....again thanks :D

PostPosted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 2:06 pm
by Matt. K
The composition is very deliberate and very effective. To my eye it adds a sense of order and calm. I like.

PostPosted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 2:17 pm
by Slider
Very nice. Perfectly named and well executed :D

PostPosted: Sun Oct 08, 2006 5:37 pm
by marcotrov
Lovely treatment and compositional balance :)
cheers
marco