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Some portraits from the weekend..

Postby Kyle on Thu Sep 28, 2006 10:53 pm

Hi all :)

Well on the weekend, i was up in qld for jamboree, sport compact drag racing.

I was expreimenting with fill flash (Big thanks to Paul for the loan of one of his sb800 kits! :D ) And I'm fairly stoked with how these came out.

Would love to hear others opinions on how they can be improved :)

1. Emma
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2. Pulo
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3. Mercury motorsport girls
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Kyle :)
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Postby Justin on Thu Sep 28, 2006 10:56 pm

improved? One more button undone on #3 perhaps?

8)

#1 is my fave, the fill light is good and you have a lovely catchlight in her eyes
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Postby Kyle on Thu Sep 28, 2006 11:00 pm

I've got about 30 shots of those girls. :D

We had a corporate box for the weekend, and we are good friends with guys at mercury motorsport. so we had the girls up for 20mins, i chased them round with my d70s+sb800+lsp2 pj :)

1 is definitely my favourite :)

Thanks justin :up:
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Postby Rainey on Fri Sep 29, 2006 1:15 am

Fantastic set...

OF PHOTOS! :oops:

I agree, no.1 is the best shot, but I think it would look great if you chopped out the shine on her gums, just above her teeth.
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Postby Glen on Fri Sep 29, 2006 8:21 am

Kyle a great bunch of photos :D
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