Dusk in the vineyards

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Dusk in the vineyards

Postby stubbsy on Fri Oct 06, 2006 12:12 am

Two images from my outing to the Hunter Valley vineyards last weekend with Matt, Sam & Leigh.

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Edit: Updated with less saturated images
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Postby Geoff on Fri Oct 06, 2006 12:15 am

Beautiful images Peter - the composition is perfect. Mind me asking if you did much/a lot of PP sharpening? They look a LITTLE over done when I view them on my lappie monitor. Beautiful none the less!
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Postby Yi-P on Fri Oct 06, 2006 12:28 am

That dynamic range, its way toooo faarr :shock:
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Postby Geoff on Fri Oct 06, 2006 12:31 am

Maybe it's just the magic of the D2X in very capable hands? :)
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Postby stubbsy on Fri Oct 06, 2006 12:42 am

I think you guys are right. I've just replaced the images in the original post with less saturated versions. I must say though that the colours were very intense in the sky and the golden glow on the vines was impressive in the flesh.
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Postby sirhc55 on Fri Oct 06, 2006 1:09 am

Very nice Peter :)
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Postby Sheila Smart on Fri Oct 06, 2006 8:11 am

Beautiful images, Peter. The skies in each are just so gentle.

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Postby ABG on Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:35 am

There's something about that first image that just draws your eyes to it and around it time and again. It's simply wonderful. The second is a very nice image, but doesn't keep drawing me back to it in the same way.
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Postby Glen on Fri Oct 06, 2006 10:42 am

Stubbsy, I am the same as Andrew on the first, just love it.
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Postby rokkstar on Fri Oct 06, 2006 12:14 pm

Peter,

These are great. I like 2 best.

Could you tell me how you've done these because mine have not come out anywhere near as good as this. This is a merge of the 3 bracketed shots yes?

Lovely greens and great colours in the sky.
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Postby stubbsy on Fri Oct 06, 2006 2:45 pm

rokkstar wrote:Could you tell me how you've done these because mine have not come out anywhere near as good as this. This is a merge of the 3 bracketed shots yes?

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Both of these are single images.
- first step = processed in DxO Optics
- brought into photoshop as a dng file.
- added a Nik Color Efex Grad ND filter (selectively) to darken the sky
- a little burning in the very top of the sky in both images to darken them slightly
- In the second shot I then added a Nik Color Efex Grad blue (again sky only)
- Nik Color Efex brilliance warmth - cooled second, warmed first
- a little dodging to even out the "lightness" of the distant vines
- finally a small color balance adjustment layer (sky only) to punch up the red and blue midtones slightly

I think that part of the result is also due to the slightly higher dynamic range I'm seeing from the D2X CMOS sensor.

Edit: I'll hunt down and post the originals with no PP and after DxO later tonight
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Postby stubbsy on Fri Oct 06, 2006 2:47 pm

To all of you - thank your for your comments. The light at this location was just perfect and lasted a fair while too. I find when there are no clouds you often get that dreamy effect in the sky.
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Postby radar on Fri Oct 06, 2006 3:19 pm

Great photos Peter,

I prefer number 1. I think it is because it has the dam and the trees, keeps me coming back to the middle while the second one doesn't really have this.

Thanks also for sharing your technique.

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Postby stubbsy on Fri Oct 06, 2006 8:31 pm

As promised, below is the original of the first image with no PP and the same image after DxO processing. Click for larger

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Postby marcotrov on Fri Oct 06, 2006 8:46 pm

Gorgeous lighting and tones Peter. I think #1 is my pick here :)
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Postby Bob G on Sat Oct 07, 2006 1:46 am

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These are nice
I didn't see the originals but I really like the rich velvia look which is really well suited to these shots
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