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 by Hyena on Sun Oct 08, 2006 10:31 pm
Hey guys,
Coming home from an outing I snapped a few pictures of the missus as she was being silly and posing. I liked this shot and she said it was a pity I wasn't in it too. I didn't have my tripod with me so I handed the camera to her, stood against the same wall and then photoshopped the two images together 
For a spare of the moment thing with just the onboard flash for lighting I don't think it's too bad (in my noob opinion) but I'd been keen for some C&C as to what I can do to make it better.
Would you clone out the shadows around my ears and her chin ?
Cheers Last edited by Hyena on Sun Oct 08, 2006 10:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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by phillipb on Sun Oct 08, 2006 10:40 pm
Jay, rather then clone out the shadows, it may have been better to move away from the wall if possible, then there would have been no shadows.
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by Yi-P on Sun Oct 08, 2006 10:47 pm
Yes clone out the shadows, and bump up the exposure by about 1/3 stop, it looks a little bit dark for a white wall.
Where you using oboard flash?
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by Hyena on Sun Oct 08, 2006 10:53 pm
Good point phillip, I'll remember that for next time. I haven't actually taken any proper/planned portrait shots yet.
Yi-P, yes just the onboard flash and snapped on auto.
The wall is actually a sandy/bone/grey sort of colour. My shirt, as pictured, is white though
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